读后续写温二模续写讲评.docx

该【读后续写温二模续写讲评 】是由【春天资料屋】上传分享，文档一共【8】页，该文档可以免费在线阅读，需要了解更多关于【读后续写温二模续写讲评 】的内容，可以使用淘豆网的站内搜索功能，选择自己适合的文档，以下文字是截取该文章内的部分文字，如需要获得完整电子版，请下载此文档到您的设备，方便您编辑和打印。精品文档精品文档1精品文档读后续写:温二模续写讲评课本节课特色:,所给文本可根据主要情节分成 4个scenes:1)Dana赠与Tim鼠娃娃; 2)Dana邀请Tim参加她的生日会;3)Tim和妈妈为Dana挑礼物;4)Dana告知Tim她父母礼物不是真的老鼠。不同于常规的6要素把握一个整体,场景的切分可以由点到面,扩充故事,树立立体故事画面感。根据storymountain的模式,将几个scenes串联在故事中,起承转合,推动情节。2矛盾冲突的场景分析:Dana父母的礼物由老鼠变换成自行车,导致 Tim之前买的塑料球似乎派不上用场了;再结合线索词句,对所给提示句进行Q-A模式,回答提问,头脑风暴,从而使学生能清晰明白故事走向课堂输入式的翻译:根据固定的故事走向,进行中译英句子翻译;:一句多译,发挥句型与词句的多样性,让学生显性输出。达成目标:,构建 storymountain,会分析故事情节,把握人物性格,不偏题;围绕主题写,侧重Tim问题解决和处理能力,体现友谊。,,学****优秀表达;也可以进行评析,取其精华去其糟粕,共同进步。教学步骤Step1. ,找到主要人物,?(mainplots) 遵循记叙文6要素根据故事线,进行故事梳理,建议分成4个场景;再根据storymountain的模式,把握故事走向。,therattoyandTim,whatcouldyoulearnfromthem?Clue3线索情节:Inferandbrainstormbyraisingquestions把握人物情感,根据线索,进行提问和回答( Q-A模式),理清续写方向。(用上至少5个underlinedWords)Task1语言基础 Task2:多种表达 Task3: (可以放在下个课时处理)?Dana:aratkindofpersonTim:Dana'sgoodfriend,?(mainplots)AtDana'syardsale,,."Nezumiisextraspecial,sohe'."',,。精品文档精品文档2精品文档Scene1:AtDana'syardsale精品文档精品文档8精品文档DanagaveNezumi,acottontoyratwithaneartornoff,。ShetheninvitedTimtoherbirthdaypartythenextevening,."Ofcourse,":,Tim',线轴,'',whereTimsearchedandsearchedandselectedaclearplasticball,'searanddecidedDana'。Scene3:Athome----inapetstoreAthome:Tim'smothershowedhimthegift,aknittingspoolshapedlikeamushroomInapetstore:,,:IntheclassroomDanatoldTimthatherparentsweregivingheranewbikeinsteadofaliverat,。精品文档精品文档4精品文档Step1:,giftsbirthday'sgitsfromDanatoTim NezumifromDana'sparentsAbikefromTim?Clue2线索句,Dana=====."Nezumiisextraspecial ,sohe'." ,。,。。精品文档精品文档6精品文档Whatcouldyoulearnfromthesentenceabove ,Clue3线索情节,InferandbrainstormbyraisingquestionsParagraph1:Athomethatafternoon,:Allofasudden,?(tobuyarealrat?Tomendtheoldtoyrat?.....)淺協蹤髖阴异纾蹑軟***鲳齟骊闳疖。Howtodealwithit?/processofpreparing?WhatdidTimthinkofhisnewgiftforDana?。Step a continuation 起,草续篇,用上至少5个underline的Words:Tim,gift ,person,Nezumi,Dana,like,surprise ,ball,friend ,best猎昙径篩幫覺餅号檁诹憤韧閘諶伛。 ,,迅速地“砰”一声关上门。Timdashedouttheroom ,,拽着她的手臂,恳求妈妈帮忙修复这个旧的鼠娃娃Hefoundhismom,clenchingherarm,pleadinghertoperfect/mend-。,号召着妈妈带他去宠物店Excitedly/Excited/Thrilled,jumpidowngfrombed/rollingoutofbed,Timappealedhismothertogotopetshopwithhim詣臉铁缔键险殡葒茕糧闵荧蠻龅优。,就像 Dana很善良,不会精品文档精品文档8精品文档伤害别人一样。Ithithimthat(urredtosb./itdawnedonsb./itstrucksbthat)therewasakindofratnotbitinganyone,***顎。,他们彼此拥抱,彼此明白,这个老鼠成为了他们友谊最好的见证 .Bathedin,Immersedin/Lostin,thewarmatmosphere,theyhuggedwitheachother,:多种表达训练叁鄉獵跞嬋鯽肅跡篳爺镌嫱术裣钨。,他感到很失落。On/Upon thinking thatthe ball hepreparedwould beuseless,hefeltdisappointed/。Theinstanthethoughttheballhepreparedwouldbeuseless ,。Thinkingthattheballhepreparedwouldbeuseless,hesatthere,。,鼠娃娃会焕然一新,他的心里感到一阵激动。e/overwhelmedbyexcitement,Timhadneverthoughttherattoywouldberefreshedafterbeingdecoratedandmended.(非谓语)NeverhadTimthoughttherattoywouldberefreshedafterbeingdecoratedandmended,anairofexcitementfloatedintheair/hisfacewaslit/brightenedwithexcitement.(倒装句)Timfailedtolearnitwasafterbeingdecoratedandmendedthattherattoywouldbesuchamazing,hiseyestwinklingwithpleasure(.强调句、独立主格)尧鵡鷚稈嬤裆喲窩茎处屜烏脚鹾詩。,Dana心里乐开了花。精品文档精品文档9精品文档HavingreceivedthepresentfromTim ,Danawasoverjoyed/...。HavingreceivedthepresentfromTim,Danajumpedtojoylletoutascream.,具体的动作,Dana'slivelyeyesglittered闪烁,like,。Anairofdelight/,写,,Athomethatafternoon , ,' ,。Paragraph2,Allofasudden, ,MomaskedTimwhetherhewasgivingDanaanoldcottonratwithoneearasagift ,'sconfusedexpression ,。Paragraph2,Allofasudden,hehadanidea."WhataboutbuyingaliveratforDanaasshelikesratssomuch,"-,whereTimfoundsomelovelysmallrats,。精品文档精品文档11精品文档CarefullyheexaminedthemonebyoneandfinallychoseagrayonelookingquitelikeNezumi."Thiscertainlyisasurpriseyetthebest ,"Timbeamedatit.[76words]討***鳩户揀鷹芈诂儂驄***铨断胄镂。精品文档精品文档12精品文档