My ideal job.doc

... ... My ideal job Every person has his own ideal job. Some people wish to be doctors, while others want to be teachers and so on. As far asI am concerned, I have been dreaming of being a teacher for a long time. First, my major is English , soI want to get a job about teach . Secondly, good teachers are knowledgeable and amiable; meanwhile, they have wide vision of some academic fields . Finally, teacher can constantly expand his knowledge and understand lots of customs about different cultures and countries. To achieve my dream of being a qualified teacher ,I have to make sufficient preparations. Fro one thing, I must learn my specialty well and study at my spare time, just as the saying goes: “ teaching is educating .” For another, I should enhance my eloquence so that I can express the allusion about the view clearly. What ’s more important, I should control my mood freely and treat every students kindly. Being a good teacher is difficult, but I believe ifI endeavor to do this thing in all hands. I’ ll be essful sooner or later. 评语: 文中的连接词和过渡词合理,使得全文结构紧凑,但文章行文稍欠流畅;能熟练使用长难句,文中的长短句搭配合理, 此外文中句式变化多样,希望继续努力,再创佳绩;文章用词不错,学术词汇较为丰富,另外作者在拼写方面做得很棒 My ideal job Every person has his own ideal job. ?[ 教师点评] own : 注意 one's own + n. 和 n. of one's own 的常用方法。灵活使用。好评报错?[ 学****提示] 易混词汇: perfect, ideal 均含“完美的,极好的”之意。 perfect : 用于褒义指某人或某物等达到理想中的完美无缺;用于贬义,则相反,指十足的坏。 ideal : 语气较强,指完美到使人称心如意的地步。