商志考研英语写作笔记(打印版).doc

商志考研英语作文 1 /5 大作文第一段 How enlightening pelling the above drawing is! It is so funny that whoever sees it cannot help thinking:_____. ( 这句自己加完整,从宏观上描述一下图画就可以,笼统的,大体的) ______while_______.( 这句从微观上具体说明一下图画要描述的矛盾点, 必须找到矛盾点, 用到 whil e 这个单词) Simple as it looks, its intended( 或者用 implied) meaning goes far deeper what on earth ( 究竟) does the drawer (作者) really aim to convey. 第二段 What the image above vividly mirrors (名词用做动词) goes far more than a simple image, instead, it carries (有) a thought provoking socia l phenomenon:____. ( 本文的主旨) There are upsetting ( 如文章不是讽刺性的, 就把 upsetting 删除) parallels today in our munity, and an acquaintance of mine may serve asa good .( 用一两句话来举例)Another telling example is my former colleague, who___. (另外一个例子,如果字数够就不用再举) 第三段: Much can be done. To begin with the schools and the mass media should develop noble and worthy values and qualities among people, doing their utmost to awaken people of the growing threat of this worsening situation. ( of this worsening situation 自己可以换成主旨的句子,如果不换,这样也可以。如文章不是讽刺性的,就把 worsening 删除) What is more, the authorities (当局) should play a dominant role in taking nationwide actions to curb( 如文章不是讽刺性的, 就把 curb 换成 promote) such practices. In conclusion ,all the society should actively more sustained (持续) and concerted (一致) offorts. Although we still have a long way to go ,a promising start has begun, and a happy, healthy and