Practice makes perfect.( 熟能生巧) Page -1- There is no shortcut to ess.( 成功没有捷径。) 作文讲评 Those who can ’t learn from history are doomed to repeat it. S tep1. Learn from your peers. Step2 积累 Less is more. 归纳:写人必备闪亮词汇: 1. 被视为/ 被誉为 2. 被提名为 3. 因…而出名 4. 因…受…的欢迎 5. 出色的,杰出的, 非凡的, 出类拔萃的 6. 聪明的 7. 关注… 8. 出名的,闻名的 9. 与…相处融洽,与相处和谐 10. 对…有天分 11. 精通,擅长 12. 对…感兴趣 13. 对…很狂热 14. 偏爱… 15. 担心… Step3 小试牛刀 Practice makes perfect. There is no shortcut to ess.( 成功没有捷径。) 你校将在假期组织部分学生赴英国学****作为该项目的负责人,你需负责将两位赴英学生的情况介绍给英方家庭。[写作内容]请根据以下表格内容,写信给英方家庭介绍这两位学生的情况。信的开头和结尾已给出。姓名李华陈伟特点开朗、乐观待人友善、有点害羞爱好体育活动、阅读、听音乐与李华一样担心的问题饮食不****惯沟通困难期望多了解英国的历史文化多交朋友,提高英语水平 Dear Mr. & Mrs. Smith, Thank you for your offer to host two of our students. The boys ’ names are Li Hua and Chen Wei. Here isa little bit about them. …… Once again thank you for your generosity. Sincerely Yours, Secretary of the project [写作要求] There is no shortcut to ess.( 成功没有捷径。) 只能使用 5 个句子表达全部内容。[评分标准] 句子结构准确, 信息内容完整, 篇章结构连贯。 Sample: Li Hua is an open-minded and optimistic boy while Chen Wei is friendly but a little shy . Despite their different characters, they both are passionate about sports, reading as well as listening to music. Li Hua shows more concern about food, thinking that he may not get accustomed whereas Chen Wei is worried about some possible difficulties municating with others. As for their expectations, Li Hua is eager to have a deeper understanding
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