2016高考英语写作复习公开课.ppt

基础写作训练
平均分:
峰值:
约15分
17~19分
最吃亏学生群:
中等左右学生
书面表达是提分最大的潜力股
5分
9分
23分
高考满分作文
I’m very pleased to tell you the changes in my life since our homework has reduced. Before that, learning during the day was very simple. Having class and doing homework was the only thing we should do. In the evening, we also had a lot of homework to do. We could not go to bed until 11:30. Nevertheless, since reducing the learning load, my life has e much more interesting. I often visit museums puter rooms and draw pictures in my spare time. In the evening, I also have time to watch TV and read newspapers. I no longer stay up late; on the contrary, I go to bed at about 10 pm.
In short, I am quite satisfied with my life now.
高考英语作文第五档(很好)要求:(21-25分)
1. 完全完成了试题规定的任务,覆盖所有内容要点。

2. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。
3. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。

4. 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误,但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;具备较强的语言运用能力。
5句话强化训练
① Shooting, originated as a means of survival, developed into a sport only in the late 19th century. ② The sport , which first appeared in 1896, was ever suspended during the 1904 and 1928 Games. ③ It was only four years before the sport returned to the Olympic. ④ However, not until 1968 were women first allowed pete in the Olympic shooting. ⑤ With the sport ing more and more popular, it has grown steadily from just 3 shooting events at the 1896 Olympic Games to 17 today.
经典案例:广东08高考
句子表达有何亮点?
写作中复合句常见的错误
,没有主句
The keeper who had lived in the light tower
for a long time, so he could keep calm in the
storm.
→ The keeper, who had lived in the light tower for a long time, could keep calm in the storm.
,把两个简单句当成一个句子
② The old man thought of his son, tears came
down from his face.
① The hall is different from all other buildings ,
it is made of glass.
,表达不自然
There are over fifty students in this school who
are going to take part in the sports meet next
Sunday.
→ Over fifty students in this school are going to take part in the sports meet next Sunday.
① The