[考研英语]考研写作4.ppt

考研写作4
连俊霞
北京新东方学校
+原因分析段
2006
It is blind worship that makes it possible to do such crazy/unreasonable things as the photos display. The main reason, I assume, would be the distorted education of the popular culture leading to the pervasiveness of the star-worshipping. As is shown in the statistics of a recent survey launched by a non-profit institution, the increase of teenagers’ someone is so prominent that the result caused by it may be concluded as follows.
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1强调句说明寓意
插入
分词做定语
3数据论证
desire/aspirations of respecting
eagerness to respect
2过渡说明原因
+原因分析段
… It may mislead adolescents to dream about an immediate ess/triumph rather than to dedicate to their study. And it is of little surprise to find their disappointment at last.
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4结果推导
5进一步推导
形式主语句
二、高分范文得分解密
寓意说明段+举例说明段
(1)五至六句(80-90词):第一句说明寓意(承上启下);第二句说明如下事例可以证明;第三四句一个事例及扩展;第五六句另一个扩展。
具体化——切忌以理说理。
(2)注意事项——切忌例子私人化。
(3)扩展方式——数据论证、借用常识、引用权威、因果论证、比较论证
例中人/例中事 behave(s)/occur(s) in the same way that 图中人/图中事 do(es) in the picture.
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寓意说明+举例说明段
1998 (P34)
It seems reasonable when people laugh at the cartoon, but it would no longer be laughable when people find similar things taking place in our daily  Recently there is a trend of making promises in various fields of our society. From departments of government mon shopping centers, many businesses who supply products or offer services have made various promises to their customers or service
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分词作定语
定语从句
寓意说明+举例说明段
They assert their products to be of good quality or promise to offer excellent  As a matter of fact, many of these businesses claim in the same way that(比较) the hen in the above cartoon promises to lay
of great importance/significance=
important/significant
of great/little possibility= possible/impossible
of great help=helpful
of poor/outstanding quality
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of+n.=ad