闪光词句的使用.ppt

写作的用词和造句
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Lecture
用词的标准
1)忌用口语词
. “You know”, “Well”, “gonna”
2)忌用生僻词
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Lecture
闪光词的基本标准
1)准确
Context(上下文) . commit crime
Connotation(内涵) . 30%discount
Collocation(搭配) . apply to/for
Culture(文化) . dog
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Lecture
闪光词的基本标准
2)多样
. a big/great/sharp increase
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Lecture
准确、多样
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a good man: kind, honest, generous, brave, warm-hearted, sympathetic, selfless
good food: tasty, nourishing, rich, fresh, appetizing, abundant, delicious
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Lecture
词汇选择-Tips
1)考试中一般不要出现good, bad , many, thing, think, people, opinion 等等。
2)一定要学会换词,用形象,具体的词替换太宽泛的。
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用词造句-多样化
(1) The goats grazed peacefully in the farm and were unaware of the approaching hunter. (并列分句1+2)
(2) Grazing peacefully, the goats in the farm were unaware of the approaching hunter. (现在分语短语+简单句)
(3) In the farm, the goats grazed peacefully and were unaware of the approaching hunter. (副词短语+并列分句(1)-(2) )
(4) There were goats grazing peacefully in the farm, unaware of the approaching hunter. (简单句+形容语短语)
(5) As the goats grazed peacefully in the farm, they were unaware of the approaching hunter. (原因副词从句+主句)
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Lecture
用词造句-多样化
(1) The young pilot was on his first overseas training.
(2) He felt very uneasy.
(a) The young pilot on his first overseas training felt very uneasy.
(b) The young pilot felt very uneasy during his first overseas training.
(c) The young pilot’s first overseas training made him feel very uneasy.
(d) Extreme uneasiness seized the young pilot on his first overseas training.
(e) The young pilot was on his first overseas training, feeling very uneasy.
(f) It being his first overseas training, the young pilot felt very uneasy.
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Lecture
用词造句-多样化
(g) Being on his first overseas training, the young pilot felt very uneasy.
(h) The young pilot was on his first overseas training and felt very uneasy.
(i) The young pilot, who was on his first overseas traini