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刚刚落幕的六级作文题目和四级作文题目如出一辙,都是属于给定观点型。在全球化日益发展的今天,很多大学生为了给自己找个好“婆家”,对于各种各样的技能证书产生了浓厚兴趣,因此考证热潮席卷校园。
首段可以直接引出“考证热” Certificate Craze On Campus这个话题。第二段主要还是具体分析产生这种现象的主要原因以及此种现象会造成的后果。考生可以侧重下面这几个方面展开去写:迫于就业压力,大学生普遍感觉找到自己满意的工作很难;多拿一张证书,求职时就会多一项筹码,技多不压身。从而就可以引出,有些人认为,考证不仅是对大学生所拥有技能的一个证明,同时也是大学生择业路上的一个重要砝码。另外一方面,也可以谈及考证热的负面影响,茫目考证,浪费时间,荒废主业也有一些同学对于考证存在一些认识误区,只是出于从众心理。最后一段,谈及个人看法,理性对待考证热,大学生要根据自己的实际情况择而为之,切不可盲目跟风,本末倒置去追逐一大堆职业资格证书。在校大学生的时间、精力和经济条件都有限,要注意选择专业对口、实用性强的考证课程,这样才能既对求职有帮助,又能扩展自己的知识面。
此次的作文也是一篇小型的议论文。就话题而言拓展的面很广,故在难度上不是很深,而且学生完全可以按照自己的理解写出一篇好文章。
From: 46/CET4/xiezuo/2011-06-18/
Nowadays, a growing number of people are enthusiastic about a wide variety of certificate exams. According to a recent survey, most people say they are preparing for all kinds of exams for career or academic development. Then why is phenomenon so popular? in the following paragraphs I will explore the factors involved and offer my views on it.
There are many reasons behind this phenomenon. First of all, some people say with the petition in the job market, you must be well prepared all the time in order not to be eliminated. A certificate can increase petitiveness greatly. In addition, for panies, you must have some kind of professional recognition before they offer you a position. Even for others, they take the exam just for the reason that most people do this.
As far as I am concerned, certificate is only a sign for you, but not everything. So we should better not always follow the suit. After all, the most important thing is your ability, and qualification for you to eed.
From: lishwriting/CET6/2011-06-18/
教****过好几门课程,深感写作这一课是最难教的,“危乎高哉!‘写作’之难难于上青天。……一夫当关,万夫莫开。”学生学****英语写作多时,大多不能迥脱蹊径之外,工而入逸者更是寥寥。于是我悲观起来,认定“文不可以‘教’而能”。虽说文字和技法可以也应当教一些,俾学生邯郸学步,渐次入门,但就本质特征而论,写作远不只是一个章法和技巧的问题,而是“气之所行”,是皮相之下许多深层主观因素的综合,是一个厚积薄发的养成过程。这些主观因素,在我看来,体现在国内的英语写作考试当中只局限于素心烂读的积累。Reading makes a full ***之言,我们的祖先说“读书破万卷,下笔如有神”。我们赞叹一篇文章,往往是因为我们被文章中的语言所吸引、所征服:语汇丰富、句式整齐、语言或精练或华丽,句式安排熟练自如,自然流畅;而者只能