浙江新高考英语作文指导.doc

浙江新高考英语作文指导
专题一读后续写
[选材特点]
350 以内;
,故事情节有曲折、有起伏,但是,故事线索的逻辑性比较强。
[评分参考]
阅卷时主要考虑以下内容: ;
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; 。注意:
150 左右;
5 个以上(即至少 6 个)短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
,每段的开头语已为你写好;
,请用下划线(单下划直线即可)标出你所使用的关键词语。
[写作步骤]
,确定文章线索,如是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索等,这有利于“顺藤摸瓜”。
,明确续写要求,如字数限制、使用几处下划线关键词语、续写段落的首句提示等,做到“心中有数”。
,想象续写内容。快速回读短文,揣摩文章的思路,结合段首的提示语和划线词语提示,确定续写段落的内容。
,修改错词病句。结合提示语和文中划线的关键词拟写出草稿,注意句子结构的多样性,语言的丰富性,上下文的衔接。
,最后誊写文字时,务必做到“字迹工整、清晰”。
[方法技巧]
,紧扣原文中心,以原文的结局为起点,写出故事情节的发展和变化。
,打开思路。多角度地想象出几种情况或结局,并从中加以最优选择。
,符合逻辑,防止自相矛盾。必须与上文紧密联系,使上下文融为一体。
,续文中都要安排“戏”,但不要引进影响事件结局的新角色。
注意确保四个一致:
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、结构、写作手法保持一致。
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、性格特点要与原文保持一致。
[写作要求]
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the way to work one he walked along Park Avenue near the First National Bank,he heard the sound of someone trying to start a tried again and again but couldn't get the car turned and looked inside at the face of a young man who looked stopped and asked,“It looks like you've got a problem,”Arthur said.
“I'm afraid 'm in a big hurry and I can't start my car.”
“Is there something I can do to help?”Arthur young man looked at the two suitcases in the back seat and then said,“ you're sure it wouldn't be too much trouble,you could help me get these suitcases into a taxi.”
“No trouble at 'd be glad to help.”
The young man got out and took one of the suitcases from the back placing it on the ground,he turned to get the other as Arthur picked up the first suitcase and started walking,he heard the long loud noise of an alarm.
It was from the had been a robbery(抢劫)!
Park Avenue had been quiet a moment before