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How to write a letter for advice
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如何算是一篇好文章?
-覆盖了所有的要点
-应用了较多的语法结构和词汇
-有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑,行文连贯,条理清楚。
要点全
词汇,句型(高级)和语法多样化(较复杂)语言地道
连接词
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假如你叫孙军,是恩施高中的学生,要给市长写一封信,反映学校门前交通拥挤现象,包括以下要点:
参考词汇: 穿行 thread one’s way 天桥 overpass
问题
建议
学校和一所小学毗邻,对着大街,高峰期交通繁忙;加之孩子小, 家长接送。交通更拥挤;学生过街在车辆中穿行危险。
政府应采取措施,如修天桥等。
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第一步: What must we pay attention to when writing an article ?
题材:
人称 Person (The first/ third person…)
时态:Tense (the simple present tense)
要点:…
a letter
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第一步:审题
养成重视审题的****惯。虽然基础写作题是半封闭性的,但审题仍然十分重要。现以样题为例,谈谈如何审题:
思考的问题
样题分析
第几人称?(person)
文章的题材是什么?
要写的文章主题是什么(topic)
怎样安排信息点的顺序?
(order)
动作是什么时候发生的?(时态)
(when)
第一人称
一封信
建议政府采取措施舒缓交
通拥挤的状况
说理逻辑性
一般现在时
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建议信篇章结构
⑴说明建议的内容;
⑵提出具体建议的原因;
⑶指出采纳建议的益处。
注意事项:语言要委婉、礼貌,顾及对方感受。
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Dear Bob,
I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to (引出主题).
Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to . Then, it also helps to . Besides, it should be a good idea to . You can also . (此三句不同的句式提出建议)
As to , I suggest (有时根据需要具体到某一反面). In addition, (其他建议). I'm sure (预测可能的结果,给对方以行动的信心和决心).
I'm looking forward to (表达愿望).
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
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