中国学生常见写作错误.ppt

中国学生常见写作错误
Chen Shengmei
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Remember
We Learn something from what we hear; we learn more from what we see; but we learn most from what we do
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宏观结构
Title: all the first letters should be capitalized except articles (a/an/the), prepositions (of/in/on…), conjunctions (and/but…), and adverbs (out/ off…). The first one and the last one will always be capitalized no matter what parts of speech they are.
Contents:
Paragraphs: 3-4 paragraphs will be better.
Cohesion/coherence
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Avoid
Oral English: you, I, we, there be.
Repetition: unrealistic fantacy, both the two; different kinds of;
Literal translation
Terrible handwriting
Redundancy
Irrelevant content
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典型错误(一)
Spelling: globe, backward,
s-v agreement
literal translation: labor fruits, if not,
plete sentences
plural/singular
verb as a subject
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典型错误(二)
no verbs in one sentence
abstract and concrete: relation/relationship,
Collocation: encourage…to do…,
parts of speech
good/well; confident/confidence, ess/essful/eed/essor, progress, relieve/relieve, social/society
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典型错误(三)
Punctuation
Conj: although, but,
Order of time and place
Concrete parative form
Chinglish
Parallel structure
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典型用词错误(一)
somebody/something/
People/person/individual
Face/be faced with/be confronted with
Make sb do sth
Discuss/have a discussion about
On website/in newspaper/in magazine/in books
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典型用词错误(二)
Compared with/considering/given/judging from
Rate/price与high搭配
Always/still/also等词的位置
Maybe
At the same time/in the meantime/in the meanwhile
Be satisfied with
The aged/the old/the old people
The number of the students/the