writing建议信.ppt

Writing
Conclusion (your wishes)
Structure
Beginning---the purpose
(reply to the letter)
Body (your advice)
Para 1: Presenting the problem---the purpose
I am writing in reply to…
I would like to suggest that…
I am writing with my suggestion/ proposal about…
I am writing to express my views concerning…
You have asked me for my advice with regard to…and I will try to make some conductive suggestions.
You’ve asked me for my advice on … and I’ll try to make some practical suggestions.
Thanks for trusting me. Regarding your problem about…, I’d like to make some suggestions.
I am writing to share some advice with you
Para 2: Proposing solutions
I feel that it would be beneficial if…
I would like to suggest that…
I would mend that…
If I were you, I would…
You may consider doing…
It would seem to me that you could…
In my personal opinion, it would be wise of you to take the following action.
As far as I’m concerned, it would be more beneficial if you could…
You’re supposed/expected to …
It would be a good idea if …
Para 2: Proposing solutions(connectors)
Firstly, … Secondly,… Thirdly, ….
Besides,
In addition
Furthermore
Moreover
What’s more,
On the one hand,...on the other hand
Para 3: Concluding by reconfirming the proposed solution
I hope you will find these suggestions/ proposals/ mendations helpful/practical/ useful.
I trust you will take my suggestions into account.
I would be more than happy to see improvements in this regard.
I would be ready to discuss this matter to further details.
I’ll be more than happy to see improvements in this matter.
Should you have any problems, please feel free to contact me at any time.
I’m willing to discuss this matter with you whenever you need help.
All in all, every effort is rewarding.
I will be happy to see your improvements in this regard.
Dear ____, You have asked me for my advice with regard to
_______, and I will try to make some conductive
suggestions here.
 In my humble opinion, you would be wise to
take