中考英语满分作文.doc

中考英语书面表达优秀范文赏析:信
中考即将到来的时刻,英语复****应更多地集中在中、难度题型的练****上,今天和同学们谈谈书面表达这个题型。写作是英语综合能力的形式,这个形式体现学生本人的词汇量大小;单词、词组和句子的运用能力及逻辑思维能力。下面就一个有关锻炼身体的话题和一封写给父母的信,从构思、文章结构到写作的方法来看如何完成这样的书面表达。
例2:
健康对于我们每个人来说是非常重要的,但你的父母天天忙于工作而忽略了这个问题,你很为他们担忧。请你以此为话题,并结合提示给他们写一封信。
提示:,而不是开车或坐车;
,或打球、或游泳;
;
,要早休息。
要求:,意思连贯,语言流畅,语法准确,符合逻辑;
—100词左右;
,不计入总词数。
构思方法:
。
:
(女)担忧父(母)的身体状况;
;
(球类运动、游泳等);
;
。
写作方法:
(母)的身体状况担忧。
(母)怎么做。
,要注意语气,不可以命令。
。
学生的作文:
(1)
Dear Dad(Mum),
You’re so busy every day that you don’t pay much attention to your health. I’m worried about your health all the time. I’d like to give you some suggestions. I hear walking is the best sport. pany isn’t far from home, is it? Why not walk to the office? You’d better take exercise at least once a week, such as playing tennis in the gym. Going to swim is also a nice choice, too. What’s more, it’s necessary to have healthy food. Try not to stay up too late. Having enough sleep can help your brain work better.
Dad, please accept my advice. I really wish you healthy!
Your loving son (daughter)
Tom (Mary)
(2)
Dear Dad(Mum),
You’re so busy every day that you don’t pay much attention to your am worried about you. I hope you