XX年考研作文.docx

XX年考研作文.docxXX年考研作文Thispicture,whichillustratestheimportanceofloveandhelpbetweenparentsandchildren,consistsoftwodrawings・Thefirstdrawingshowswhatamotherandadaughterwerelike30yearsa,,incontrast,"shandinthefirstdrawingwhilethedaughterisaidingthemotherinthesecond・第一段作者非常朴实的描写了图画内容,没有过难的词汇;逻辑清晰:段落总分总,首句为主题句,二三句分述,最后一句总结。亮点还在于句型多变。首句一个简单句添加插入结构,三句也同样使用插入语,实现华丽变身。本篇文章由两图构成,使用的“ineontrast",“while”Whatisintendedtoshowinthepictureisclear:parentsshouldhelptheirchildrenwhenthelatterareyoung,andthechildren,whengrowingup,:父母与子女之间应该相携。值得学****的地方是要变换说法,避免单调重复。Impactedbythechangeinlifestyles,Chinaiswitnessingsomekindofdisintegrationorloosingoftiesinfamily,thelovebetweenparentsandchi1drenisnotonlyeternal,ponentofahealthysociety・Onlyuponthesolidfoundationofdomesticwellbeingcantheskyscraperofsocialprogressbebuilt;butifthatbeloosening,theconstructionuponit,howevertoweringandglorious,。句型更加丰富多样,不仅采用插入结构(最后一句),首句采用过去分词,第三句采用only半倒装句。Asisclearlyshowninthefirstpicture,,anotherfatherisstudyingjustashissonisdoing・Whatthetwopicturesintendtoil1ustrateis:ratherthanmakerequeststoyourkids,whynotsetanexamplef