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锦上添花:句库与闪光点?闪光点:1、长短句交叉;2、使用插入语;3、用词准确,多样,形象;4、关键词换用,避免重复;5、句型使用准确、地道。?适当用被动替换主动,这样能更客观的反映事实,句子开头不要总是用we/I(比如写结尾时不用weshouldpayattentionto而用Attentionshouldbepaidto.)?善于使用插入语,比如说把副词、连接词however/therefore/forexample/Ibelieve等,作插入语放在中间,一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后,两边分别加上逗号。?一定要学会换词,换形象,具体的替换太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现good,bad,many,thing,think,people,opinion等等)比如上面例子中,applicable替换proper,approaches替换ways,implement替换carryout,sharpenone’scompetitiveedge替换enhanceone’scompetitiveness(提高某物竞争力)?平时多积累有用的表达方式、句型,尤其是教材中的优美句子。?谨记:水平不够者慎用,避免弄巧成拙。闪光点:,characters,folks替换(people,persons),favorable,rosy(美好的),promising(有希望的),perfect,pleasurable,excellent,outstanding,,unfavorable,poor,adverse,ill(有害的)替换bad如果bad做表语,,enjoyingromancewithgirls/,asaresult,.(anarmyof,anoceanof,aseaof,amultitudeof,ahostof,many,ifnotmost):用many,ifnotmost一定要小心,many后一定要有词。,ifnotmost,harbortheideathat….同理用most,ifnotall,,quietafew,,taketheattitudethat,holdtheviewthat,itiswidelysharedthat,itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat)替think(因为是书面语,所以要加that),business,),(ly),growing替换moreandmore(注意没有growingly这种形式。所以当修饰名词时用increasing/,,,rewarding替换helpful,,client,consumer,purchaser,,extremely,,hardlyinevitable...替换unnecessary,,sthexertsatremendousfascinationonsb替换sbtakeinterestin/'sattention替换attractone',dimension,