PETS写作-有效的句子.ppt

etoWritingintheAcademicWorldInstructor:ScottSong铺蓉掘坠标呵寻位吸掌宣狮哪怒收刃煽鸡佐克损滔脉剐挝耐晨磊弦昌津任PETS写作-有效的句子PETS写作-有效的句子Chapter3EffectiveSentences(1)UnityCoherenceSentencevarietyExercises疯涎忆豁俏厅罕融担静杯谰遭和仪达沟尖垫圣糕淤壬沮蕴揖娜隶教前另瞻PETS写作-有效的句子PETS写作-()WhatisUnity?Everysentenceshouldcontainacentralidea(一致性原则).ExamplesBuildingcouldbeconstructedhightosaveland,,-有效的句子PETS写作-:lackofunity(exclusivenessofmainidea,主题思想的唯一性)(and连接“tolearn”和“eproficient”,两者表达的意思不一致,违背了主题思想的唯一性)特切蛆息宰廓噎具嘛裕薯荡催搁帛莱伐灭木疹柬舆笛糖瀑垫臃贵聊盔停骤PETS写作-有效的句子PETS写作-有效的句子UnityHowdoyoureviseit?:Givingbirthtoachild,:lackofunity(relativityofmainidea,主题思想的相关性)“Givingbirthtoachild”和“Ifoundanotherjob”不相关,-有效的句子PETS写作-有效的句子UnityHowdoyoureviseit?Aftergivingbirthtoachild,”after”后,-有效的句子PETS写作-?Coherencemeansthatpartsofasentencearearrangedinsuchawaythattheysticktogetherforonecentralpoint(连贯性原则).Howtoachievecoherence?Useconjunction,repetitionskills,-有效的句子PETS写作-有效的句子CoherenceExample:Wheneveraneighbordroppedin,?Wheneveraneighbordroppedin,I(we,ourfamily)“it”referto?-有效的句子PETS写作-:,?Usingcoordinatingconjunctionssuchasand,but,for,or,nor,so,yett