写作的七项基本原则.ppt

?一、语法错误?(一)句子结构错误?? 1) There are more and more students like to use puter. ? 2) There are still many problems should be noted and resolved. ?? I like chatting on line very much, I go to bar almost every weekend. ?? As is known to all puters play an important role in many fields of our life. ?? If work hard, we will surely be essful. ?? 1) Why college students spend more and more time on puter? ? 2) I often wonder where have they got their money. ?(二)动词错误?? Many people thought that the will be more useful in the future. ?? 1) I have excited several days at the news that you e here. ? 2) Most of the students satisfy with the service in the dining hall. ?? 1) Wise man seek opportunities rather than wait for them. ? 2) Someone are afraid puter may control men in the future. ?? 1) Let me to represent everyone to say “ hello ” to you. ? 2) Do exercise in the morning is good for one ’ s health. ? 3) Having studied in our school for 3 years, the canteen service has changed a lot. ?三)代词错误? 1) We can puters in doing everything you like. ? 2) A college student should be able to do their washing on their own. ?(四)冠词错误? 1) Horse is an useful animal. ? 2) The exam will be held in the December, 2004. ?(五)词性错误? 1) I wish you can consider my suggests. ? 2) If a person wants to ess, he must learn to endure sufferings and setbacks. ?二、用词错误? 1) Students must know how to apply puter. ? 2) People can touch many new things on the . ? 3) The purpose of this letter is to react some opinions on the service in the dining hall. ?三、表达****惯错误? 1) Why generated so large a change? ? 2) Now 6000 yuan can buy a puter. ? 3) A room often lives 6-8 students.