一:具体化:我是一个老师——我是一个英语老师——我是上海环球雅思主教雅思写作的老师关键:一双慧眼:能够敏锐地找出一个句子中比较笼统的,适合用具体化的思路进行改写的对象。? Inthelastcentury,thefirstmanwalkingonthemoonsaid:“Itisabigstepformankind.? Inthelastcentury:Inthe1960 世纪60’年s(20代);Man:AmericanastronautArmstrong;Said:announcedInthe1960’s,whenAmericanArmstronglandedonthemoonforthefirsttime,heproudlyannouncedthatitwasagreatstepforthemankind二:单词转换:优先转换:动词;;cheaply;improved;better;Produce-----manufactureCheaply-----economically(improved;better)------advancedNowadays,:英语句子不外乎是两种结构:实义动词和be动词结构? 因此可以在什么怎么样和什么是什么之间 进行切换来实现改写。Manypeoplesayteachersshouldonlyteachstudentsacademicsubjects;:teachsbsth:(什么怎么样---什么是什么)老师只应该教学生功课(什么怎么样)------教好学生功课是老师唯一的职责(什么是什么):Otherssayteachersshouldalsotaketheresponsibilityofteachingstudentstojudgewhatisrightandwrong.(1)Someothersholdthatatrulyoutstandingteachershouldbethementorofbothknowledgeandlifetotheirdisciples.(2)Someotherssaytheresponsibilityofateacherarenotjustpassingonprofessionalskills,butalsotheimprovement
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