描写地点类作文（北京）.ppt

Basic Writing
Principles of Getting High Grades
Advanced Vocabulary
Diversity of Sentence Structures
Linking Words
Include all the info mentioned
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Without grammar mistakes
1简单句，1并列句，1复合句，1特殊句型，1非谓语v.
Writing Steps
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Make sure of the writing task
Making simple sentences or phrases
Reorganisation of the information
Draft and revise the writing
1：审题，确定信息
1. 北京，位于中国东北部，是中国的首都，全国的政治
和文化中心。
The informatio should include:
A letter from Li Hua describing Beijing
for Mike who is very interested in it.
2. 全市面积一万六千多平方公里，人口1400余万，是全国
第二大城市。
3. 夏季炎热多雨，冬季寒冷干燥。
4. 历史悠久，是旅游胜地，有很多著名的文化古迹如紫禁城、
颐和园、长城等。每年吸引众多世界各地游客。
Descrition of Places
 Location
 Status
 Area
 Population
 Climate
 History& Cultural
relics
locate, lie, situate
capital, the political, economic and cultural center
cover a total area of, with an area of...
with a population of...
dry, moist, rainy, freezing, mild, (pretty) hot
with a long history of..., cultural sites,
places of interest, a tourist attraction
scenic spot
2：遣词造句
 Beijing is located in the northeast of China..
It is the capital of China.
 It is the political and cultural center of China.
 Each year, it attracts many visitors from all over the world.
With a long history, it is a tourist attraction with many cultural sites, such as the Forbidden City, the Summer Palace and the Great Wall.
It is the second largest city.
 It covers a total area of more than 16,000 square km with
a population of over 14 million citizens.
 It is hot and rainy in summer, but it is cold and dry in winter.
1. 合并：____________、_____________
2. 排序：____________、_____________、____________、
____________ 、_____________.
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3:信息重组
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Beijing is located in the northeast of China, it is the
capital and the political and cultural center of the country.
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It covers a total area of more than