一:具体化:
我是一个老师-—我是一个英语老师——我是上海环球雅思主教雅思写作的老师
关键:一双慧眼:能够敏锐地找出一个句子中比较笼统的,适合用具体化的思路进行改写的对象。
In the last century, the first man walking on the moon said:“ It is a big step for mankind。”
In the last century: In the 1960’s(20世纪60年代);
Man: American astronaut Armstrong;
Said: announced
In the 1960's, when American Armstrong landed on the moon for the first time, he proudly announced that it was a great step for the mankind
二:单词转换:
优先转换:动词;形容词
Food can be produced much more cheaply today because of improved fertilizers and better machinery。
Produce; cheaply; improved; better;
Produce—--—-manufacture
Cheaply—----economically
(improved; better)-———--advanced
Nowadays, people can manufacture food much more economically thanks to more advanced fertilizers and machinery。
谓语动词转换:
英语句子不外乎是两种结构:
实义动词和be动词结构
因此可以在什么怎么样和什么是什么之间进行切换来实现改写。
Many people say teachers should only teach students academic subjects; Others say teachers should also take the responsibility of teaching students to judge what is right and wrong。 Discuss the both viewpoints and give your own opinion。
第一句:teach sb sth :(什么怎么样--—什么是什么)
老师只应该教学生功课(什么怎么样)-—--——教好学生功课是老师唯一的职责(什么是什么)
Some people believe that it is the sole task for a teacher to introduce academic knowledge to the students。
下面一句试试看:Others say teachers should also take the responsibility of teaching students to judge what is right and wrong。
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