公开课-----中考书面表达作文复习指导.ppt

书面表达专题
How to write a good composition?
design
begin to build
Decorating
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B
以 “Housework ”为题写一篇英语短文
你认为中学生有必要干家务吗？请表明自己的观点并说明原因
（至少三条，不少于６０词）。
I think we should do housework. First, in a family mother does the most housework. If you don’t want your mother to be too tired, do some housework to help her. Second, housework can help us do everything all by ourselves, and it can also help us take good care of ourselves when we leave home one day. Third, housework can relax ourselves. Every day after school, I usually feel tired after hard study. So I can relax myself by doing housework.
Do housework ! Enjoy it !
We should do some housework because we are students.
We do housework every morning, every afternoon, every
evening. My mother does housework, my father does
housework, So I do housework, too. Doing housework can
help us in our study.
A
B
、确定时态
、覆盖要点
、顺畅过度
、查漏补缺
某地教育局将每年的９月１日定为爱心慈善日，今年
活动的主题是“人人为贫困孩子献爱心”．现在请你以学生
会名义写一份倡议书，内容要点如下：
　
　１、许多孩子因贫困而上不起学;　
　
　２、他们没有足够的学****用品和衣物　
　　
　３、每个孩子都应该有上学的权利　
　　
　４、我们应该做一些力所能及的事去帮助他们，比如．．．
have the right to do something
Dear students,
In some parts of our country, there are many children out of
　　　Thanks for your joining.
Students’ Union
poor too….to….
school things and clothes
as possible as one can
Dear students,
In some parts of our country, there are many
children out of school. They are too poor to go to
school. At the same time, they don’t have enough
school things and clothes. In my opinion, each
child should have the right to go to school, but
there are few chances for the poor children. So
we should help them as possible as we can, just
like giving them school things, clothes and so on.
　　 We hope they will enjoy the same chance of
getting knowledge as we do in the school.
Thanks for your