2013版写作指导课.ppt

，分析语篇结构，记住相关话题
的功能句。
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学****目标
语篇复****与书面表达
三年的初中生活就要结束，崭新的高中学****即将到来。
回顾过去，你一定有成功的喜悦与失利的遗憾；展望未
来，你肯定有美好的憧憬和实实在在的打算。请你以“Unforgettable Memories” 为题，给英文报纸21st Century “青春校园”栏目写一篇80词左右的征文。
注意：（学业有成、爱好特长、
师生情谊以及最大的遗憾）和对未来的憧憬。
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3. 文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Unforgettable Memories
How time flies! Three years passed_________________
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中考真题(2012日照)
我们要围绕几个要点来写？

过去的回忆




写作要点分析
各要点之间的关系如下图：
C
be good at/do well in
be interested in
like/enjoy doing
be able to...
D
get good grades
get on well with one’s schoolwork
be good at all the subjects
make great progress in math/...
B
help sb. with one’s English/math...
with/without the teacher’s help
make friends with...
change one’s life
A
be afraid to do...
argue/fight with...
同位之间讨论下面的词组的汉意，并说出它们
可以用来描写写作要点中的哪些方面？
Discussion
我们如何将这些词组连成句子呢？让我们一起来回顾相关的语篇吧！
My time at junior high school has been mostly good.
I’ve been at junior high school since 2004. In the
first year, I made some good friends, and had a lot
of fun. However, I didn’t do so well at school in
Grade 6 and 7. I didn’t study hard enough.
Fortunately, my friends showed me that education
is important for my future, and I began to work
harder at school.
语篇重温
短文是按照______顺序，使用一般过去时态和_________时态进行描写的。
I used to be a bit shy, but my friends and teachers
have helped me to be more confident. Now I know
that I have the ability to do good work. My reports
in Grade 8 were much better than in Grade 6 and 7.
I’m very happy that I’m no longer bottom of the
class. Since Grade 8, I think I have become more
confident.
I have learned a lot at junior high school. I have worked hard and I have en