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23号基础写作公开课.ppt


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23号基础写作公开课.ppt
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Basic Writing



Embellishment
高考基础写作中句子的润色
Basic Writing



测试目的及要求:
基础写作题都是控制性作文,要求考生在10分钟内(考纲所提供的参考时间)用5个句子表达所提示的全部写作内容,要求做到句子结构准确、信息内容完整、篇章结构连贯.

Do you want to get high marks
in basic writing?



1.Cover all the information in 5 sentences
五个句子,覆盖了所有的要点
2. Application of the grammar structures and advanced words
应用了较多的语法结构和高级词汇
3.Coherent, tight 上下文的连贯性
即有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,
使全文结构紧凑
The requirements of a good basic writing



Ways of embellishing the sentences
1. Use some phrases or advanced words and avoid using repetitive words.
表达时尽量用一些词组或高级词汇,
避免使用重复的词语,使
语言不至于单纯和幼稚。
也可以给文章增添亮点。



1. 我喜欢读书,而我的弟弟喜欢看电视。
I like reading while my brother enjoys
watching TV.
喜欢: like, love, enjoy, prefer, appreciate,
be fond of, care for
2. 学好英语很重要。
It is very important to learn English well.
It is __ _____ __________ to learn English well.
of great importance
Practice: Translate the following sentences.



Ways of embellishing the sentences
2. Use more sentence patterns such as Complex Sentence, Inversion or Non-predicate verbs to replace Simple Sentence.
多使用一些复合句,倒装句,非谓语动词等地道的句式来代替简单句,使语言更加丰富.
The attributive clause
Noun clauses
Complex
Sentence



1. He was late again and his teacher was very angry. (定语从句)
2. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.(名词性从句)
3.When the students saw the teacher entering the room, they stood up. (非谓语动词)
4. We don't realize its value until we lose our health. (倒装句)
Practice:Rewrite the sentences



1. He was late again and his teacher was very angry (定语从句)




2. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.(名词性从句)
Practice:Rewrite the sentences
He was late again, _________________
____________________.
____________________ is that the little girl knows so many things.
which made his teacher very angry.
What surprises him



3.When the students saw the teacher entering the room, they stood up. (非谓语动词)



4. We don't realize its value until
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