Simon雅思写作小作文讲解课件笔记.pdf

Simon ’ s IELTS Writing Task 1
Question types
1. Line graph Numbers
2. Bar chart Describe
3. Pie chart Compare
4. Table Changes/trends
5. Diagram-comparing
6. Diagram-process
Essay structure (4 paragraphs )
1. Introduction
One sentence : Paraphrase the question
2. Overview
2 sentences :The main , general things
3. Details
4. Details
3+4: Why 2 paragraphs ?
This makes you organize or ‘group ’ the information better
(or put the overview at the end)
No conclusion!!
Line graph ( Line graph show numbers changing over a period of time )
You will not see a graph with only one line .
You will almost definitely see 2/3/4/5 lines.
Your job is to compare the lines , not describe them separately.
Frist , make a very general comparison .( Summary / overview paragraph )
Second , compare the lines at specific point . ( ‘details ’ paragraphs )
For example ：4 lines
You can ’t describe everything
Write at least one thing about each line.
你看不到只有一条线的图形。
你会看到 2/3/4/5 条线。
你要对这些线条进行比较，而不是单独描述它们。
首先，做一个非常一般的比较。 （总结 /概述段落）
第二，比较这些线条的特定的节点。 （‘细节’段落）
Paragraph 1 : Introduction
The graph below shows electricity production (in terawatt hours ) in France between
1980 and 2012 .
改写： The line graph compares the amount of electricity produced in France using
four differdent sources of power over a period of 32 years.
这个折线图比较了法国在 32 年间使用四种不同电源的发电量。
Paragraph 2 :Overview — 2 sentences , 2 main points.
It is clear that nuclear power was by far the most important means of electricity
generation over the period shown . renewables provided the lowest amount of
electricity in each year.
很明显，在所示期间， 核能是迄今为止最重要的发电方式， 可再生能源每年提供
的电力量最低。
Paragraph 3 : Detail — 2 paragraphs , compare the lines
In 1980 , thermal power stations were the main source of electricity in France,
generating