考研1号考研英语写作【写作160篇】——读.docx

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附件中是部分考研1号读者朋友们根据考研1号系列图书相关话题所作的写 作练****里面附有考研1号编辑所作的具体点评与修改意见，希望大家在日常写 作练****中能积极的学****吸收这些读者作文中的优点以及不足，对比自己写作中存 在tural exchange can be vital to the existence of a civilization and the fate of a country. Not only should we heritage fine tradition, but also we should be aware that absorbing excellent foreign culture is an essential element of cultural development.
【范文点评】
【第一段点评】
①Much provokingly presented in front of us are Confucius and two foreigners who are modestly inquiring each other about culture. ②Obviously, the author intends to convey us a phenomenon with increasing popularity: cultural exchange and multi-communication between countries are increasingly essential to the development of civilization.
第一段：首句简要描述了图画内容，两个外国人和孔老夫子在对话，相互请 教两国各自的文化。第二句点出了图画的主题，那就是跨文化交流已经成为了文 化发展必不可少的组成因素。
该段没有语法错误，首句成功运用who定语从句，②句运用图画作文展开 深意的常用句型，the author intends to convey us a phenomenon ...
【第二段点评】
©Cultural exchange has prospered long backward in Tang Dynasty, when merchants and clergies from different cultural backgrounds came with various commodities and their religious faith. ②Zhang qian, who were sent by the emperor, paved the well-known Silk Road across the ancient continent, thus greatly facilitated the multi-communication between Tang and Middle Eastern countries, thereby culture during Tang developed in an imaginable speed.
③Just to the contrary, the Qing Dynasty, w