FNM高中三年级英语写作 复习课件.ppt

Try to get the
highest marks in writing!
2005年湖南高考英语写作题目要求:假设你是李平,最近参加了由某电视台举办的中学生英语演讲比赛并获奖,该台准备组织获奖者去北京参加一次英语夏令营活动,现就有关事项,,用英语以书信形式给予答复。
活动时间
7月15日-22日或8月15日-22日
活动内容
参加英语角/学唱英语歌曲
听英语讲座/表演英语短剧看英语电影/教外教学中文
对活动内容的建议或要求
注意:
1选择适合你的时间并说明理由.
2选择两项你喜欢的活动并说明理由.
3对活动的内容提出至少一个建议或要求.
4词数100左右.
5信的开头和结尾已经给出.
考生作品
Dear Sir or Madame, I am very glad to be invited to the English summer camp.
I prefer to go in August, because I am free at that time. I like to take part in English Corner and learn to sing English songs. I like English corner because I want to use English to talk with others. I like English songs because my parents are artists. At the same time, I suggest that all the activities should anized together and then we will have a good time together.
Thanks a lot.
Yours truly,
Li Ping
优点:,使全文结构紧凑,无语法错误,达到了预期的写作目的。
缺点:没有应用较多的语法结构和词汇,句式单一。对建议的表达缺乏思想性。
参考范文
Dear Sir or Madame, I am very glad to be invited to the English summer camp.
I prefer to go in July because I will have to prepare myself for the new school term in August. It seems all the activities you offer are attractive and meaningful, but I’d like to attend the English lectures, from which I can get more information on British and American culture. With ing of the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games more and more foreigners are eager to know about China. So I hope to teach foreigners Chinese and spread Chinese culture.
It’s been a dream for me to visit Beijing. Could anize a tour around the city during the camp.
Thank you very much. Yours truly,
Li Ping
高分作文的标准(21-25分):
;
;
;
,具备了较强的语言运用能力;
,使全文结构紧凑;
.
Ⅰ英语句子的种类
简单句(The simple sentence)
并列句(pound sentence)
复合句(plex sentence)
请用合适的并列连词把每组句子合并为一个并列句。
1. I turned on the watched it.

2. I bought my sister a didn’t like it.
并列句
I turned on the TV and
watched it.
I bou