2016年雅思写作语料库（社会类）：鼓励年轻人做社会服务的利弊.doc

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2016年雅思写作语料库（社会类）：鼓励年轻人做社会服务的利弊

题目：
Some people suggest that young adults should be encourag cultivate their loving hearts. Still, one’s coordination ability, teamwork spirit and management ability could be promoted during the process of serving the community. Eventually, as for many cityborn young people, it is the experience of community service that makes them become independent, sociable and cooperative.
三段：鼓励年轻人做社区服务的弊端的展开：
Nonetheless，under no circumstances can we ignore the potential drawbacks triggered by introducing unpaid community service into secondary school curriculums . First, the unpaid community service will surely occupy the finite and precious time of the students, which can otherwise be used in learning or building their bodies. Further, a great many students are too young or inexperienced to cope with the complicated community service. In this sense, instead of doing the community a favor, their voluntary activity might add burden to the community.
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尾段：再次亮明观点
In closing, my stand is that although community service is a challenging task and might take up some time, the merits of encouraging students to do the community service outshine the demerits. Only by means of voluntary community work can we cultivate more and more responsible, wellbehaved and caring social citizens.
解析：enable sb to brave new challenges i