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作文范文之2023年考研英语真题作文
2023年考研英语真题作文
【篇一:考研英语短文写作09年真题分析(含评分标准)】
考研英语短文写作十年真题分析
第十节 2023年
section iii writinal problems. now i want to give some opinions of as we know, regulation was made to solve the problem in june 1st of 2023. the use of plastic bags was restricted in the myself about the “white pollution〞. supermarket and many other shops freely. at the beginning, it was carried on well, but now i found plastic bags were used in some small shops for free or with no pay.
i am writing to tell you that we should solve this problem soon with the help of your newspaper. you could make some sincerely, li ming investigators about it and write some reports of it, so as to appeal to all the people’s attentions of our society. 我真诚地希望您能认真对待我的信。感谢您拨冗关注。 您诚挚的 李明
评语:本文很好地完成了试题规定的任务,与目标读者完全产生了预期的效果:
1.内容包含了所有的内容要点,该文第一段的内容更吻合题目的要求。
2.所使用的语法结构和词汇比拟丰富。
3.语言比拟自然流畅,尽管存在个别的语法〔例如,时态〕和用词错误。
4.有效使用了各种衔接手段,层次清晰,组织也比拟严密。
5.格式与语域恰当贴切。
dear editor wang,
time.
i believe there are ways to improve the situation. our communities could offer bags free, which will substitute plastic bags. meanwhile, some education on environment and white pollution should be held to local people. besides the above two, much more can be done. i hope you would consider it carefully.
yours truly li ming i am a senior student living in beijing. being a citizen in our capital, i care a lot about our environment. but, although the law of not using plastic bags had been enforced since june, the effect is not very good. i am afraid “white pollution〞 will still exist for a long
评语:较好地完成了试题规定的任务,根本能够对目标读者产生预期的效果:
1. 包含了所有的内容要点,既简要介绍了自己的观点,又提出了具体的建议。
2. 所使用的句子结构和词汇相比照拟丰富,例如:being a citizen in……, i care……等。
3. 语言根本正确,当然也存在着一些语法错误和用词的错误,但是并不会严重影响意义的表达。
4. 采用了适当的衔接手段,例如, but, meanwhile, besides等,层次也比拟清晰。
5. 格式和语域比拟恰当。
三档:5-6分
to whom it may concern:
as a student of a university, i want to take this opportunity to express some points about “white pollution〞. there

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