浙江新高考作文概要写作summary writing.pptx

Summary writing
What is a summary?
A summary is a short statement that gives only the main points of sth, not the details.
It is a brief, complete and objective restatement of the main idea and key points of a position.
本文总共25分,共分为5档
第五档(21-25)
理解准确,涵盖全部要点。能准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇。
有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使所完成的概要结构紧凑。完全使用自己的言语。
4C 原则
评分标准
complete
correct
coherent
concise; no copy
Step1. Read for the style and structure of the passage.
How to write a summary?
Argumentation
Exposition
Narration
Recently, a wild fish restaurant was ordered to shut down in Harbin, northeast China's Heilongjiang Province. As a result, the owner of the restaurant faced a fine of 500,000 yuan.
Chen Yan, a tourist from Changzhou, east China’s Jiangsu Province, complained online on
February 12 that he was being overcharged 10,000 yuan for three big fish at a local wild fish
restaurant in Songbei District of Harbin. Worse still, he claimed that his family members were
beaten and threatened by the restaurant staff when he questioned the bill at the checkout. Chen’plaint immediately spread on China’s social media. The investigation results by some local government departments showed that the restaurant had no fault, since they had already tagged the price, which raised doubt izens again.
Further investigation showed that one type of the fish served, Huso, was not the real wild
species, but a kind of farmed fish at a much lower price. Since the prices of the fish did have
violated the rights of consumers, the restaurant got its due punishment. Meanwhile, relevant
government departments that have stood by the side of the restaurant in the first place would
also be investigated and punished.
Similar cases of fraudulent (欺骗的) pricing at scenic spots have also been reported elsewhere
in China. In October 2015, for instance, a tourist was overcharged for a course of shrimp (虾) in
the coastal city of Qingdao, east China's Shandong Province, when the restaurant claimed the
quoted price o