2021年GRE写作常见易错扣分问题.docx

2021年GRE!作常见易错扣分问题
GRE写作常见易错扣分问题盘点分析
GRE写作常见扣分问题:逻辑不清
大体上来说,,通篇逻辑,段落之
间,
,weaponssopowerfulas
tobecapableofrenderinguse_tinct,andtheconsequentfearforoursurvival
-,
Istillhavetoargueinitsfavor,becausewithoutit,wehavenohope.

saythatareturntoalesstechnologicallydrivenapproachtolifewouldhave
thebenefitsofreducingstressandallowingustolivesimpler,happierlives,
,somuchsothatmuchof
kinds
,one
realizesthatsuchamovewouldonlyreturnustoalifeofdifferentof
stress,oneoffalsesimplicity,

lifewherechildbirthisthemainkillerofwomen,andwhereanemergencyis
dealtwithintermsofhoursanddaysinsteadofminutesandhours;alifewheretherearenophonesorcarsorplanesorcentralheating,noprovendrug
therapiestotreatmentalillness,
peoplehappy?
Whatwealreadyhave,,
insteadofallowingourselvestobeparalyzedbyfearandworry,weneedto
learnhowtocleanupthepollutionwehavecaused,andhowtodealwithaworld

moveawayfromtechnologyintoamoredifficultrealm,thatofdiplomacyand
compromise:tomovefromthebullystanceof〝IambiggerandbetterandIhave
moretoysandsoIwin〞toaplacewhereeveryonewins.
,advanced
asitis,


ispushedtotheouteredge,thatiswhereserendipitousdiscoveriescanoccur.
Thishasbeenseenthroughoutte