雅思写作提分5点要求.docx

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雅思写作提分5点要求
对于许多备考雅思写作的同学，常常能遭受到总突破不了高分的逆境。单词，模板，万能句式什么的都没少背，为什么还不能提高呢?今日我给大家带来了雅思写作提分五点要求,盼望能够关心到大家，一起来学****吧。
eeded help on the farm.
从意思上来分析，上面这句话需要表达的重要的概念是“grandfathers not being able to study”.
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在表达这个概念时，原句用的主语是situation,谓语动词是was,不能强调需要表达的重点概念，可以改为下面这句话：
My grandfather couldnt study engineering because his father needed help on the farm.
，避开频繁使用“there be”结构。
例如：There were 25 cows on the farm that my grandfather had to milk every day. It was hard work for my grandfather.
可以改为：
My grandfather worked hard. He had to milk 25 cows on the farm every day.
更简洁的句式为：
My grandfather worked hard milking 25 cows daily.
，把从句改为短语或单词。
例如：Dairy cows were raised on the farm, which was located100 kilometers from the nearest university and was in an area that was remote.
简洁的表达方式为：
The dairy farm was located in a remote area, 100 kilometers to the nearest university.
，仅在需要强调宾语而不是主语的时候，才使用被动语态。
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例如：In the fall, not only did the cows have to be milked, but also the hay was mowed and stacked by my grandfathers family.
本句不够简洁的缘由是本句的重心应当是“劳碌的家庭-my grandfathers family”.
而使用了被动语态后，仿佛重心变成了cows和hay,下面的表达方式是主动语态，相对来说更简洁一些：
In the fall, my grandfathers family not only milked the cow but also mowed and stacked the hay.
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