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Instructor:X罗强
Week1
第一节写作要求及评分标准
(一)测试要求
要求依照所出的题目和列出的写作大纲或图表、数字统计表等(也附有写作大纲)写一篇200词左右的短文。能做到内容切题、圆满、条理清楚,文章结构慎重,语法正确,语
言畅达适合。考试时间35分钟。
写便条:
要求依照提示写大体50--60词的通知、便条、请贴等。要求格式正确,语言得体。考试时
间10分钟。
(二)题型:
本部分为主观试题,分两节:SectionA和SectionB。
SectionA:作文(Composition)
X围。
本节是作文,题目主要属于记述文、说明文或谈论文的
SectionB:写便条(Note-writing)
本节是写便条。
测试目的:
依照授课大纲的要求测试学生在基础阶段末期用英语书面表达思想的能力。
(三)评分标准
作文评分标准
本题满分为15分。
阅卷标准共分五等:15分、14-12分、11-9分、8-6分及5-3分。
分——文章内容切题,表达思想清楚,行文畅达水利;论证严实,论据充分,基本上无语言错误。
14-12分——文章内容切题,表达思想清楚,语言比较畅达连结,只有极少量语法错误。
11-9分——文章内容基本切题。尚能表达中心思想,但说理不够清楚,文字连结不够好;有少量语言错误。
8-6分——基本切题。表达思想不清楚,连结性差。语言错误多。
5-3分——文章条理不清,语言缺乏连结,句子错误很多,或语言虽畅达水利但圆满偏题。

依照2004年新版考试大纲,便条满分为10分,从格式、内容、语言以及语言得体性四方面进行评分。
2010年专业四级便条写作评分标准
评分构成分值要求
日期右上角,
April22nd,2007//
22April,2007//
,2007//
22/4/2007//
4/22/2007//
April22nd////
称呼在日期下一行左侧,
DearJimmy,
//DearJimmy:
//Jimmy:
结尾
右下方,
Trulyyours,//
Yourstruly,//
Yourssincerely,//
Sincerelyyours,//
Yours,
内容3涵盖invited+declining+
explaining
语言4语法、词法正确

扣分标准
凡不切合上述正确格
式要求均扣1分。结束
语和谦称在同一行,人
名没写或用xx表示
扣1分,最多扣2分
少1点扣1分,最多3项内容扣3分
严重语法、词法错误扣1分,一个句子或同类错误扣1分,拼写等小错误2个扣1分,最多扣4分
语言得体性1总分在8分以上考虑加此
分
总字数50-60字(包括三部分格少于40或多于80字扣1分
式)
日期、称呼、结尾全左对齐也可:如:
April22,2007
DearJimmy,
Ihave
Sincerelyyours,
Sally
(四)样卷解析
SectionBNote-writing
WriteonAnswerSheetTwoanoteofabout50-60wordsbasedonthefollowingsituation:
Yourclassmate,Jimmy,isheadoftheuniversity’,,declininghisinvitationandexplainingwhy.
Markswillbeawardedforcontent,organization,grammarandappropriateness.
(9pts)
April22nd,2007
DearJimmy,
It’sverykindofyoutoinvitemetojointheuniversity’.
However,I’

.
Yours,
Mike
(7pts)
22April,2007
DearJimmy,
Thankyouforyourinvitingmetoparticipatingintheuniversity’’mnotabletojoinyou,.
Yours,
Mike
(5pts)
DearJimmy,
Sorry!Icouldn’ttakepartinyouruniversityswimmingclub,!Iamsureyouwillnotbeangryatme,becauseyouarealwaysmybestfriend.
Sorryagain!
Yours,
Tom
April22,2007
(3pts)
Hello,Jimmy:
I’’:why?Notbecauseotherreasons,,exceptme,morepeoplewillsupportyou.
Tony
第二节合用写作模板
致歉历年考题:
(2007)Yourclassmate,Jimmy,isheadoftheuniversity’,
,declininghisinvitationandexplainingwhy.
文:
April22

nd,2007
DearJimmy,
It’sverykindofyoutoinvitemetojointheuniversity’,I’’.
(2001)Yesterdayyoufailedtoturnupfortheappointmentwithyourteacher,

meeting.
X文:
May15,2001
DearProfessorWang,
,mygrandmasuddenlywentill,andmy
parentswerenotin,,itwastoolate,andyouhadalreadyleft.
Pleaseforgiveme.
Iknowyou’rebusythesedays,butIwonderifyoucouldagreetomeetmeat2o’clockonFridayafternoon.
I’mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.
Yourstruly,
Kevin
致歉模板
题目解析:
因未能赴约而致歉
DearMissNancy,
MuchtomyregretIwasunabletokeepmypromisetoattendyourbirthdaypartylastSaturday,owingtothefactthatmylittlesonwassuddenlytakenillearlythatday.
Hopingtoseeyousoon.
Trulyyours,
Kevin
2、因未能及时还书致歉Unabletoreturnborrowedbookontime
DearKate,
Excusemeformylongdelayinginreturningtoyouyour“RobinsonCrusoe”whichIreadthroughwithgreat
,,Ihopethatinviewoftheadditionaldelightthusaffordedbyyourbook,youwilloverlookmynegligenceinnotreturningitsooner.
Thankingyouagainfortheloan.
Sincerelyyours,
Kevin
Usefulexpressions:
1).Imustapologizefor.
2).Iamvery/really/extremely/awfully/terriblysorryabout
3).IhopeyouknowhowsorryIamnottobewithyou
4).MuchtomyregretthatImaynotbeabletokeepmypromisebecause
5).IreallyregretthatIcannot.
(2005)Youhavegot2ticketstoaconcertgivenbyafamouspopband/,Hilda/Mike,describingbrieflywhatitisandinvitingher/himtocomewithyou.
X
May15,2005
DearMike,
I’,soI’dliketoinviteyoutotaketheconvert

’clockthisSaturday
’ll
.
Yourssincerely,
Kevin
DearJane,
WehavefourticketsforafamousfilmshownatGuangmingCinema,TheLongestDay,Friday,?We'llbelookingforyouateightsharpFridaynightinfrontofthecinema,sodon'tdisappointus!
Warmestregards.
Usefulexpressions:
1).Iampleasedtoinviteyouto
2).Isthereanychanceofyourcoming?
3).Iwaswonderingifyoucouldcome
4).Wesincerely/faithfullyhopeyoucanattend
5).Iwouldbeveryhappyifyoucouldcome
(2006)Youhavegottoknowthatyourclassmate,Michael,isorganizingaweek-.
April23rd,2006
DearMichael,
I’mgladtolearnthatyou’
upwithwherewegoandhow??Iamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.
Yours,
Kevin
2002Youhaveheardthatyourfriend,Jack,
interestinit,askinghimaboutitsconditionandofferingapriceforit.
X
May15,2002
DearJack,

English.
’dliketospendnomorethan
?
Usefulexpressions:
1).Iwouldappreciateverymuchifyoucanprovidemewithsomesuggestionson
2).Iwouldbegratefulifyouwouldbesokindastoprovidemewithcertaindetailsabout
3).Ihavereadonthenoticeboardthat
4).Ijustwanttoknowspecificallyabout
5).Iameagertoknow
IV.
2009Lily,yourroommate,islookingforapart-
,tellingherwhatthejobisandstrongly
recommendingittoher.
X
April18

th,2009
DearLily,
IhappenedtoseeanadforaprivateEnglishtutorforaschoolboy,andIthinkthisinformationisusefulforyou.
Foryoutoldmethatyouwantedtotakeapart-
interesting,,youwillbecomeacompetenttutor,foryouareexcellent.
thinkyoushouldacceptitimmediately.

is
I
Yourssincerely,
Kevin
(2008)Jane,yourclassmate,isthinkingofsubscribingtoanEnglish-,tellingherwhichnewspaperitisanddescribingtwofeaturesofthepaper.
April20th,2008
DearJane,
IheardbychancethatyouaregoingtosubscribeanEnglish-,,,itislearning-.
Yours,
Kevin
(2000)You’vereadonthenoticeboardthattheuniversitylibraryislookingforapart-,George,,:
May15,2000
DearGeorge,
I’velearnedfromthenoticeboardthattheuniversityislookingforapart-’saweekendjob.
Ithinkit’.
Yourssincerely,
Kevin建议模板

历年考题:(2010)Yourgoodfriend,John,isthinkingoforganizinganend-ofthe-.
X文:
April17th,2010
DearJohn,
Ihappentolearnthatyouwerethrowinganend-ofthe-’sreallyafascinating
ideaandI’
,IhavealmostahundredCDs,soyoucandropbywhenyouhavetimeandgetthoseyoulike.
Yourssincerely,
Kevin
留言模板
题目解析:
Lynn,
:..Yourmothercalledat9:.
Yoursfaithfully,
Laura
Usefulexpressions:
1).I’mhappytoinformyouthat
2).Wouldyoudomeafavorby
3).Awishestoseeyou.
4).Cometomewheneveryouhavedifficultieswith
5).Ifyouwouldliketo,please

历年考题:(2004)Yourfriend,Jane,hasfailedinthefinalexam,.
X文:
May15,2004
DearJane,
I’mverysorrytohearthatyou’’slookforward,.
Yoursfaithfully,
Kevin
慰问模板
题目解析
DearLily,

,Ishallbesendingaletter,notofsympathy,.
SincerelyYours,
Linda
Usefulexpressions:
1).Ourdeepestsympathyiswithyou.
2).Ourheartsaresaddenedbyyourloss.
3).Wewishtoexpressoursympathyinyourlossandtoletyouknowthatourthoughtsarewithyou.
4).Iwouldliketoexpressmysorrowat

历年考题:(2003),.
X文:
May15,2003
DearClare,
Congratulationonyourmovingintoanewhouseandthanksalotforyourinvitationtoyourhousewarming
’vetogotoBeijingforbusinessfromthisWednesdaytonext
!ButIsincerelyhopeyouwillenjoytheparty.
SincerelyYours,
Kevin
庆贺模板
题目解析:
Larry,
?.
Laura
Usefulexpressions:
1).Congratulationsonyoursuccess/achievements!
2).Heartiestcongratulationsuponyour
3).Pleaseallowmetocongratulateyouon.
4).Pleaseallowmetoextendmyheartycongratulationstoyou.
5).Iwanttocongratulateyouwithallmyheart.

致谢模板
题目解析
Shanshan,
.
Linda
Usefulexpressions:
1).Manythanksforyour
2).Pleaseacceptmysincereappreciationfor
3).Iamtrulygratefultoyoufor
4).Itwasverynice/good/thoughtful
5).Iammost/extremelygratefultoyouforyourhelp.

央求模板
题目解析
DearLynn,