雅思写作需连贯性及一致性.docx

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雅思写作需连贯性及一致性
贯性包括意连和形连两个方面,前者指的是内涵的逻辑性,后者指的是运用变换词语。当然这两者常常是不可分割的。只有形连而没有意连,语句之间就没有内涵的有机的联络;反之,只有意连而没有形连,有时行文就不流畅。
阶段中语句的摆放应遵循必定的顺序,不能想到什么就写什么。假如在着笔之前没有构思,边写边想,写写停停,那就写不出一气呵成的好文章来。
下面介绍几种雅思写作内容常见的方式。
(chronologicalarrangement)
,itwasobviouslylateandwehadtohurrysoasnottomissbreakfast;weknewthediningroomstaffwasstrictaboutclosingatnineo',whenwehadbeendrivinginthedesertfornearlytwohours-----itmusthavebeenclosetonoon----theheatnearlyhidusin;,itwasfouro',judgementranoutofusandwestartedthetoughclimbtothesummit,,bysixwewerestrugglingandAndrewverynearlywentdownasteepcliff,,whenthewindhowledacrosstheflatledgeofthesummit,weknewasweshiveredtogetherforwarmththatithadnotbeenourluckyday.
本段从"rose"(起床)写起,然后是吃早餐("nottomissbreakfast","closingatnineo'clock"),然后是"closetonoon",一直写到这一天完毕("Bynine--")。
(spatialarrangement)
Fromadistance,itlookedlikeaskinnytube,butaswegotcloser,,allright,,wewerealsoastonishedtonoticethatthebuildingwasreallyintwoparts:apagodasittingontopofatubularone-,,unlikethetubethatitwassittingon,,thetubewasgloomy,,.
本段的写法是由远及近,从远处("fromadistance")写起,然后"getcloser",再到("tenfeetaway"),最后是"insidethepagoda"……当然,按方位远近来写不等于都是由远及近。根据需要,也能够由近及远,由外至内等等。
(logicalarrangement)
Ifyouworkasasodajerker,youwill,ofcourse,,,,thelargertheorganizationofwhichyouareanemployee,,whetheritisthegovernment,thelargecorporation,ortheArmy,thisabilitytoexpressoneselfisperhapsthemostimportantofalltheskillsamancanpossess.
这一段谈的是表达能力,它的重要性与工作,身份有关,从"notneedmuchskill"或"oflittleimportance"到"moreimportant",最后是"mostimportant"。
行文的逻辑性常常要靠恰当的变换词语及其他手法来完成。
Walter',though,hehadtogetthroughhighschool,soheconcentratedallhiseffortsonhisstudies---inparticular,biology,chemistry,,Walterbecameproficientinthem;however,,duringhisjunioryearofhighschool,,,onJune6,Walterachievedthefirststeptowardrealizinghisgoal.
本文中起承上启下的词语有两种,一种是变换词语(transitionalwordsorphrases),另一种是起变换效果的其他衔接手法(linkingdevices)。前者依次有:first,though,so,inparticular,and,because,however,besides,asaresult,both…and,consequently,and,:he,he,his,his,he,these,them,he,those,his,he,these,,所运用的变换词语及其他衔接用语共26个词,约占该段总词汇量的四分之一。由此可见,掌握好transitions不仅对行文的流畅有利,并且关于学生在规则时刻内写足所要求的字数也是不无优点的。
雅思写作内容中经常出现的几种错误:
1)不必要的改动时态,比方:
Inthemovie,,,hehadwaitedfortheheattodiedown,buttheycomeafterhimanyway.
2)不必要的改动单复数,比方:
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3)不必要的改动人称,比方:
Nowmorethanever,parentsneedtobeintouchwiththeirchildren'.
因而写作中,必定要注意时态,人称以及数的改变是否正确,要注意保持一致。
雅思写作Task2社会类考官范文
Therisinglevelsofcongestionandairpollutionfoundinmostoftheworld',attemptsmustbemadetoencouragepeopletousetheircarslessandpublictransportmore.
Discusspossiblewaystoencouragetheuseofpublictransport.
ModelAnswer:
Anyonewholivesinacityisawareoftheincreasingnumberofcarsontheroadandthekindsofproblemsthiscreates:trafficjams,,,itwouldseem,isforgovernrnmenttoencouragetheuseofpublictransportinurbanareas,thusdecreasingdependenceonthecar.
-,commuterswouldperhapsbemorewillingtoabandontheircarsinfavourofbusesortrains.
,buttakepublictransportintothecentral,mostcongested,urbanareas.
Indeed,,,thelesscongestiononcitystreets.
雅思写作Task2社会类考官范文
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Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?
ModelAnswer:
Ibelievethatchild-rearingshouldbetheresponsibilityofbothparentsandthat,whilsttheroleswithinthatpartnershipmaybedifferent,,,thisdoesnotmeanthatthetraditionalfamily,withbothparentsprovidingemotionalsupportandrole-modelsfortheirchildren,isnotthemostsatisfactorywayofbringingupchildren.
Ofcrucialimportance,inmyopinion,ishowwedefine'responsibleforbringingthechildrenup'.Atitssimplest,itcouldmeangivingthefinancialsupportnecessarytoprovideahome,.
Thereis,however,,,heshouldsharethosedailyduties,spendasmuchtimeashisjoballowswithhischildren,playwiththem,readtothem,helpdirectlywiththeireducation,participateveryfullyintheirlivesandencouragethemtosharehis.
Itisthissecond,fuller,conceptof'fatherhood'thatIaminfavourof,,notless,stressful,.