正反对比作文讲解.ppt

写作注意原则:
1、认真审题,即:审语境、审人称、审时
态
2、要紧扣主题,符合要求,首尾呼应
3、注意写作对象和语言风格,要有读者的
意识
4、要进行细致描写,有细节的支撑
5、要有主次之分, 详略得当
6、要力求内容新颖,必须符合逻辑
7、要做到思想健康,积极向上
切记:
1 审题要准;定位要清。
2 紧扣主题;首位呼应。
3 内容充实;详略得当。
4 合情合理;逻辑清晰。
5 语言简洁;交际得体。
1. fluency (语言)流利,流畅
2. clarity (思路)清晰,明确
3. coherence (上下文)呼应连贯
(用词)准确,精确
pleteness (内容)完整
篇章结构
主题句——引出全文的话题
支持句——围绕话题展开讨论,用事实,理由,观点等来进行解释,说明或论证。
结束句——对话题进行概括,总结归纳。
写作方法:
列举法----用事例说明主题可用表示顺序的示意词来突出每个实例。如:
first, second, third,
first, secondly, finally,
the first thing (point) is…, the
second thing (point) is…, the third
thing(point) is…,
first of all, also, finally,
one, another, the last…
以事物的重要性来排列顺序,可使文章层次清楚,重点突出。如:
for one thing, also, the worst thing
is…,
first of all, apart from that, the
most important is…,
for one thing, what is more, the
most…,
one important, more importantly,
the most important…,
one problem.., another problem…,
the most serious problem…,
比较对比法:
比较通常是指对人或事物之间的相同点进行分析。
对比通常是侧重分析两者之间的不同点,利与弊。
写作方法通常有:
1)相同点---不同点分析A,A,A, B,B,B, 结构
2)A,B, A,B, A,B, 结构(如内容较多,可逐点分析。)
Topic sentence
whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks
Supporting sentence 1
60% of the students are against the idea of the entrance fees.
(A) to have a rest and enjoy themselves in the park
(A) to e necessary to build gates and walls,
(A) to do harm to the appearance of the city.