把脉雅思写作Martin Liu.pptx

Four Questions
How is your writing?
What is wrong?
Where is the way?
Why join SEG training?
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How is your writing?
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Overall
Academic





General





现状(Situation)
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What is Wrong?
“内容”不切题(Content)
“思路”不清晰(Structure)
“语言”不规范(Language)
Task Fulfillment
Coherence and cohesion
Vocabulary and Sentence Structure
“综合症”(Syndrome)
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What is Wrong?
The university should not provide so much theoretical knowledge but give students more practical training. Do you agree with this statement?
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Nowadays, recruiting exhibitions holds frequently in many cities, especially in Beijing. Students graduating from universities and colleges lately are usually anxious and worried to take part in because quite a lot of them could not find a satisfying job. What makes it so serious?
It is no doubt that there are several reasons why employers don’t want to employ new graduated students. But it is most likely that these students lack of practical knowledge about reality.
China used to adopt the old educational system hesitated from Soviet Union. In the past 50 years, Chinese students learnt the same subjects with the same books without any change. But since China has adopted opening policies, the economy of China changed and developed enormously. It requires a lot of talented young people to play important roles in this change. People have to go on learning after work about modern knowledge of Business, Accounting, Computer, Laws, etc. Here raises a question why don’t we handle it in school, university or college.
It is time to make a real change to add practical knowledge in the subjects that students learn today.
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Where is the way?
“内容”不切题(Content)
“思路”不清晰(Structure)
“语言”不规范(Language)
了解题型,积累素材
善于分析,掌握技巧
增加词汇,熟悉句型
“处方”(Prescription)
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了解题型,积累素材
数据图(Data)
流程图(Flow)
地图(Map)
结构图(Structure)
动态图(Development)
静态图(Situation)
组合图(Mixture)
Task 1
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动态图
The line c