高考英语专题复****br/>05《书面表达评析及指导》 高考复****br/> ---书面表达评析及指导 How to improve the writing skills Chinglish horse horse tiger tiger open water watch sister up street buy things give you some colour see see heart flower angry open I call Li old big. toyear 25. American Chinese not enough You see no see people mountain people sea You ask me , me ask who ? How are you ? How old are you?You no see, I now very busy. One side play go!!! We two who and who? You give me stop!! I this morning eat breakfast. Have you eat meal? I'm a larger school student. I'm very like play basketball. We should hard study. But I better like listen music. Live to old, study to old. I had breakfast this morning. Good morning/afternoon/evening! I’m a college student. We must work/ study hard. It’s never too old to learn. But I like listening to music better. I like playing basketball very much. 应用文:书信、通知、便条 记叙文:看图作文、日记 说明文:人物介绍、活动 议论文: 高考书面表达题型 高考链接 高考书面表达评分原则以及给分范围 第五档(很好):完全完成试题规定的任务 (21- 25分) 第四档(好):完全完成试题规定的任务, 漏掉1、 2个次重点。(16-20分) 第三档(适当):基本完成试题规定的任务。 (11-15分) 第二档(较差):末完成试题规定的任务。 (6-10分) 第一档(差):末完成试题规定的任务。只能写出 与所给要求内容有关的一些单词。(1-5分) 未能传达读者任何信息: 0分。 半期考作文 假定你是李华, 你的英国朋友Peter来信询问你的英语学****情况并希望你简单介绍自己家乡,请你根据下列要点写回信。 要点: 1. 我学英语已经六年了,在老师和同学们的帮助下取得了一些进步; 2. 但是总觉得英语难学,尤其是英语中的一些****惯用法; 3. 今后一定要努力学****这门有用的外语,争取能用流利的英语和你写信; 4. 我的家乡发生很大的变化,盖起了许多高楼,拓宽了道路,变得越来越漂亮和现代化; 5. 如果有时间可以到中国来,我会带领你参观我的家乡。 注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3. 开头语已为你写好。 June 8, 2008 Dear Peter, I'm very glad to receive your letter. I will tell you something about my English study and hometown. …………. read and write find it hard fluent English to write Great changes roads had taken place in my hometown buildings widened It will be wonderful when e to China if you are free show you around I will be glad to 语言不地道;中文式思维;语言错误较多,得分13分