池国祥-英文地质论文写作中常见的问题.ppt

munityContributiontoscientificadvancement写作过程也是科研的一部分:激发思维,推敲研究结果的意义。审稿和修改过程对科研有促进作用。英文地质论文写作的常见问题结构及格式问题语法和用词问题其它问题投稿注意问题科技论文写作的主要问题是论文结构及格式问题,而不是英文问题。结构好而英文不好的论文很容易修改,而结构不好的论文则很难改。Highlight只说做了什么,没说发现什么DetailedpetrographicworkcarriedoutImportantconstraintonUmineralizationrecognizedXenotimecoevalwithuraniniteinAthabascabasinOnsetofUmineralizationrelatedtovolcanismandbrineformation引言的核心是What-Why-HoWWhatscientificproblemdoyouwanttosolve?BigpictureWhathavebeendone(previousstudies)WhatproblemsremainAvoidstatementswithoutsupport不要把研究结果在前言里讲出来没有分清目的(ourposes)和目标(objectivesThispaperaimstocarryoutdetailedfieldpetrographic,stableisotopeandfluidinclusionstudiesofthePoplarMountaingolddepositThispaperaimstounderstandthemineralizationconditionsandprocessesofthePoplarMountaingolddeposit,throughdetailedfield,petrographic,stableisotopeandfluidinclusionstudies空洞的文献总结EmptyReview:ThesedimentaryandstratigraphyoftheVikingFormationhavebeenstudiedbySmith(1978)andWalkeretal.(1990).Littleworkhasbeendoneondiagenesis,exceptastableisotopestudybyLee(1998)ThepetroleumsystemhasbeenevaluatedbyCook(1989),InformativeReview:TheVikingFormationhasbeeninterpretedtohaveformedinawave-dominatedshorefaceandtransitionalzones(Smith,1978;Walkeretal.,1990).icstudyofcalcitecementsbyLee(1998)yielded8180of-18to-15%0(PDB),whichwereinterpretedtoindicate参考文献的引用有些地区前人已做了大量工作。但这不意味这你要引用所有工作。引用什么和不引用什么要得引用要放在恰当的地方。引用某文(或图)等于告诉读者“请看要把Credit给该给的人。CitereferencesinchronologicalorderThereareanumberofpreviousstudiesinthisfield(Smith,1999;Andesetal.,2001;al,1988)Thereareanumberofpreviousstudiesinthisfield(Andesetal.,2001;Smith,1999,al,1988)Thereareanumberofpreviousstudiesinthisfield(al.,1988;Smith,1999;Andesetal,2001)