英语作文讲评设计.doc

A Teaching Plan for Writing 作文讲评课教案
Teacher introduction：English department, Grade 3，Guangzhou Nan Wu Experimental School
Textbook Edition：Oxford English Shanghai Edition
Teaching Topic：Writing “Ideal jobs”
书面表达：
最近，你班就“你的理想职业”展开了一次调查。 下表是你们小组的情况请根据表格内容写一篇英语短文，向英语校刊投稿。
组员
理想职业
原因
Mary
时装设计师(fashion designer)
　喜欢漂亮衣服，擅长绘画
Kate
园艺工(gardener)
喜爱植物，想让城市更美
Mike
作家
愿意与别人分享精彩故事
Tom
厨师
为别人煮健康美味的食物
你
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注意：(短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数);
　　 、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
　　Recently we did a survey in our class in order to learn about students’ ideal jobs. Here’s a report about my group members’ ideas.
__________________________________Hopefully everyone can realize their dreams in the future.
Teaching Period：1 Period（40 minutes）
Analysis of the writing materials：
a) The main topic for this writing is about ideal jobs.
The students from Grade 3 have a passion for writing. Some of them like writing very much. Encouraging them to write more correct sentences is a task.
More students will be able to listen to others carefully and express their opinions with confidence.
六、 Teaching aims:
1. correct the common errors.
2. use different ways to express the key points
七、 Teaching difficult points and important points:
1. Teaching important points:
Correct the common errors
2. Teaching difficult points:
Use different ways to express the k