西安交通大学研究生一年级英语写作-范文试题.docx

Part I: Sumｍary Wｒiｔing (４０　poｉｎｔs）
1． Conteｎt: ３０
ｐｒｏｐｅｒ　citaｔｉｏｎ: tｈe　ｔｉtle, ｗｒiｔer’ｓ nａme;　(５　poiｎts)
tｈeｍｅ: the　ａｕｔhor qｕｅｓtｉons ｔhe relatioｎship bｅｔweｅｎ busｙnesｓ and　suｃcｅsｓ and poiｎts ｏut　the real ｓignificanｃe of ｌife;　(5 pｏｉnts）
key poiｎｔs:
a. there’s a wrｏng wｏrship oｆ　bｕsyneｓｓ among modｅｒｎ ｐeoｐle; (5 ｐoｉｎts)
b.　ｔｈe secｒeｔe　oｆ　ｔhe ｔruｌy succｅｓsfｕl　pｅople　ｉｓ ｔｏ　learｎ　ｗhａｔ nｏｔ　to do; (5 pｏｉｎts)
c. the bｕsｉeｓt peｏple　ｍay　ｎｅｖｅｒ ｂe　suｃcessｆuｌ; (５　poiｎts)
d. evｅｎ　ｗheｎ　thｅ true sｕcｃｅｓs　comeｓ, peopｌｅ ｓｔiｌl shｏuｌｄ　noｔ forget wｈat　aｒe ｍｏre ｉｍporｔant ｉn ｔｈeｉr　lｉｖｅs; （5 ｐoinｔs)
2. Wｏrdiｎg:　5 pｏinｔs （Cｏpｙing of　the ｏrｉginaｌ　seｎtenｃeｓ　ｓｈould be ａｖoｉｄed.）
3.　Mｅchａnism: 5　points　(coherｅnce ａnd　ｃｏnjｕnctｉｏn)
Paｒt II:　Eｓsay Writinｇ (60 ｐｏintｓ)
Lａｎguａge: ４0　points
０-8
Unａble tｏ eｘpress iｄeaｓ; poor iｎ ｃoｈｅreｎce; fｕlｌ　of sｅrｉouｓ　lanｇuagｅ errｏrs
９-1６
Sｏmetiｍeｓ　uncleaｒ　in exｐreｓsｉoｎ, ｈarｄｌy coherenｔ; ｗith　a　lot ｏｆ ｌanguagｅ erroｒs, iｎcｌｕdｉng some serｉouｓ onｅs
１７-２４
Ｅxpｌｉｃｉｔ　ｉn　expreｓsing iｄeａs,　ｂaｓｉcａllｙ　coherｅｎt; buｔ wiｔh a fｅｗ　lａnｇuａｇe errorｓ
２5－3２
Ｅxpliｃiｔ anｄ fｌuent　in ｅxprｅｓsiｎｇ　idｅas, cｏheｒent; ｏｎlｙ wｉｔh seveｒal minor ｌａｎｇｕａgｅ　errｏrs
３3-４0
Vｅｒy　expｌicit　ａｎd ｆluｅnｔ iｎ eｘpｒｅｓsｉｎg　ｉdeａs, vｅｒy ｃoheｒent; almｏｓｔ wｉtｈoｕt ｅrrorｓ
Cｏｎｔｅｎｔ:　15 poｉnｔs
０-3 Ｗandering ｏｆf
４-６ Poｏr iｎ　reｌeｖance
7-９　Ｂａsiｃallｙ rｅlｅvanｔ,　ordinary opｉniｏns
１0-12 Rｅlｅvaｎt tｏ the ｔｏpi