高考英语 书面表达讲评课件 新人教版.ppt

书面表达讲评
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1. 先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定档次,然后以该档次的要求来衡量,确定或调整档次,最后给分。
2. 评分时注意的主要内容为:内容要点、应用词汇、语法结构的数量和准确性及上下文的连贯性。
3. 拼写与标点是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。
4. 如书写较差以致影响交际,将分数降低一个档次。
评分标准
写作基本功
一·书写要规范,字体大方、饱满
二. 句子要有准确性
三. 语言要有闪光点

last ,we should be calm , waiting the rescue teammates to help us .
’t take a elevator or jump from high building.
must use a wet towel to cover you nose and mouth.
are some accidents happen everyday.
should keep clam .
is wrong that to take a lift.
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Correct the following sentences
you are caught in fire .
had better to call 119 at once.
facing with the fire ,you should keep calm.
action enable us to get out of the fires easily.
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should do whatever we can to make ourselves safe . (钱倩)
is unwise to take an elevator or jump from the high build.(俏璐)
3. There is no doubt that you must make every effort to tell others you are in danger.(巧琴)
as you are ,you must keep calm.
(叶晨)
are some points that may help you when you are in danger of fire.(舒颖)
’t use the elevator ,or you will get into a worse situation .(笑航)
Some wonderful sentences from our homework:
key to escaping from the fires is to keep calm.(慧君)
is your safety that is the most important.
(淑萍)
should make every effort to get away from the fire quickly, for our life is more important than anything else.(莹婷)
from the high building is not a good idea .So dangerous is it that it will make you die.(美娟)
the most important is that we should call 119 immediately. Only in this way can we deal with the fire as soon as possible.(倪丽丽)
步骤1
审题(时态,人称,分段)
步骤2
罗列要点(化繁为简)
步骤3
组句成文(连贯性-关联词)
步骤4
步骤5
抄写
检查
具体怎样写文章
书面表达
为了普及“急救知识”,你所在的班级最近举办了一次急救知识大讨论。现请你根据以下要点以“First Aid in Fires”为题写一篇文章,说明发生火灾时要注意的几点事项,放在学校网站的英文专区里。
,身体尽量低一些,用湿毛巾捂住鼻和口逃出;
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注意: