5unit1写作课劝说信.ppt

How to write a persuasive letter?如何写好说服性信函?
Dear Bob,
I'm sorry to learn that you puter games very much and often stay up late playing them. I'm writing to persuade you to change this habit.
It is well-known that puter games a very exciting. However, they can greatly influence both of your health and studies if you spent too much time on them. First, it is bad for your health, especially your eyes. Second, if it takes too much time of your free time, you have no time to do something important like reading. Third, if you often stay up late, you will feel tired the following day and won't be able to do well at school.
So I hope you understand the bad effects of puter games and stop it.
Yours,
Li Hua
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Dear Bob,
I'm sorry to learn that you puter games very much and often stay up late playing them. I'm writing to persuade you to change this habit.
It is well known that puter games a very exciting However, they can greatly influence both of your health and studies if you spent too much time on them. First, it is bad for your health especially your eyes. Second, if it takes too much time of your free time you have no time to do something important like reading. Third, if you often stay up late you w