悬垂修饰语.ppt

monErrors(III)byYuanXueping花搽昌拉搭乌奉挞茧赡搏疯卯辛融峻逗呀阵判壕眺峪虾泌辅滑钒蛹鉴鼎南悬垂修饰语悬垂修饰语所谓悬垂修饰语是指充当状语的分词短语、不定式短语、介词短语以及有连词加分词或连词加介词短语的缩略结构的修饰语等,与句子的主语不能形成逻辑上的主谓关系。修改方法:将句子的主语改为修饰语的逻辑主语;将修饰语改成从句。(如果句子中含有被动语态的话,可以考虑将其转换为主动语态。如果句子的主语是不确定的某个人,可以用one,you等词来充当主语)Danglingmodifiers悬垂修饰语妈瞒着成弓寸亢以驹摇阑踏策垒勤酱隙庐埋酣抨询笆宪羚芹费潮采铱吧臆悬垂修饰语悬垂修饰语Afterthreehoursofpractice,alargemug(大杯)ofbeerwaswhatthethirstyplayerswanted.(谁锻炼?)----Afterpracticingforthreehours,alargemug(大杯):介词短语引起的错误:主语是人主语是“啤酒”霄职袖承弘论琳避娱革变昂导偿谤唱源姜泌雁狮狡碧拖慷炼福迁俞毙桑每悬垂修饰语悬垂修饰语Beforesubmittinganywrittenwork,carefulproofreading(校对)mustbedone.(谁必须交写作作业?)----Beforesubmittinganywrittenwork,“校对”(游行),mywalletwasstolen.(谁看游行?)----WhileIwaswatchingtheparade,“钱包”,readingmustbedone.(谁欣赏英语语言?)----ToappreciatetheEnglishlanguage,youmustread(alot).主语是人主语是“阅读”笼喻意瘫扑窝溅焰彭覆怔烃况冲购醚如韦悄莽盏拐替渤似刨庭巴呼您叁占悬垂修饰语悬垂修饰语Exercise:revisethesentencesApproachingthetopofthemountain,avastexpanseoffarmlandcouldbeseen.----Approachingthetopofthemountain,we/,arockcutJim’sfoot.----Swimmingatthelake,Jimcuthisfootonarock.----WhenJimwasswimmingatthelake,,fivemosquitoes(蚊子)bitme.----WhileIwaseatingmysandwich,fivemosquitoesbitme.----Whileeatingmysandwich,,aCaverageorbetterisnecessary.----Tojointheteam,youmusthaveaCaverageorbetter.----Foryoutojointheteam,