留学个人陈述（PS）写作技巧之全面型发展方向.doc

留学个人陈述(PS)写作技巧之全面型发展方向
我们在前面的PS写作技巧总述中谈到,有一类是全面型发展的申请者,下面我来谈一下这一类型的PS写作技巧。这一类型的申请者往往多才多艺,可能钢琴10级,花样泳全运会前3之类。这一类申请者在写PS的时候往往会非常的烦恼,不知道如何突出自己的上风,似乎我们总是在夸大学术,那么这样的能力是否算作是上风呢?可以明确的告知大家这就是上风。而且美国学校十分重视一个人的全面发展。
【范例】
开头:
只有当一个人处在追求完美的状态的时候,他才有可能最大限度的往完善他自己和他所在的领域,不管是人性,科学,艺术抑或其他.
(Only in constant pursuit of perfection can one perfect himself and his research in humanity, science, arts or any other fields to the full capacity.)
正文:
Why Scientist:体育,艺术和科学的完美结合
早在我高中生活的最后一年,我,一个有着音乐,体育和科学天赋的人,面临着三种选择:成为歌星,体育明星或者是科学家。但我尽不犹豫地选择了科学家。尽管前两种选择很可能会让我的生活布满着鲜花和赞誉,但我深深地明白体育和音乐仅仅是我的业余爱好,只有到科学家那里,艺术的创造性,人文的关怀和体育的坚持才能得到最完美的结合.
(As early as the last year of my high school life, I was confronted with a very hard decision: to be a swan, a sports star or a scienti
st. Despite my talent for music, sports and science, I have been very determined to be a scientist without any hesitation. Although being a musician or a sports star will win me a lot of fame and acclamation, I have been well aware that music and sports are simply my amateur hobbies. Only in science can the c