大学英语四级作文谚语名言类.ppt

题型分析之一------谚语警句型
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(一般三句话）
1. 点明文章要阐述的谚语或名
2. 用自己的话解释这一谚语或名言的意思
3. 论点句,表明自己对这一谚语的观点态度
（一般六句话）
A. 支持性的细节分论点 （至少两个论点；举例子证明，可以用正反两方面的逻辑）
B. 从事实引出结论，再说明论点
（一般二至三句）
conclusion:阐明其现实或更深远意义
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句型
1.
An English proverb says,
As the saying goes,
One of the great men once remarked,
Nearly every civilization has its own equivalent to the proverb,
An inspiring proverb echoing in my mind goes,
One of the great men once remarked, “Health is above wealth”. (没有必要用一对引号）
改为：As the saying goes, health is above wealth.
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第二句
It means that …
In other words, …
第三句
It goes without saying that /
It is obviously clear that /
It is universally acknowledged that
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例子
1. As the saying goes, health is above wealth.
1. One of the great men once remarked, life without health is lifeless.
1. Nearly every civilization has its own equivalent to the proverb, life that lacks health lacks everything.
2. It means that health is of the topmost importance/value in our life.
2. It indicates that making money at the cost of health is not worthwhile.
2. it means only people who are in good health are able to lead a meaningful life.
3. I cannot agree with it more.
3. Though the proverb convey some sense, I could not fully agree with it.
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第二段
论点 ：
1. Health is the foundation of a quality life. Without a good body, the accomplishments we made, the relationship we kept, the social status we try hard to build will be completely useless.
例子：
Stevie Jobs, CEO of the Apple Company
businessman who work so hard that he collapse eventually/a rich man with severe health problems
My friends/my father/myself
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例子：
Stevie Jobs, CEO of the Apple Company
(Let us) Take Stevie Job for example.
Take Stevie Job as an example. Imagine how much more he could have done to the world if he had not died at such a young age? (虚拟语气/反问句式)
Take Stevie Job, former CEO of Apple Company who died at the age of 56.
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论点
A good body