2022年BEC中级写作技巧.docx

2022年BEC中级写作技巧
[导读]为协助各位考生备考，我编辑为广阔剑桥商务英语初级考生整理了“2022年BEC中级写作技巧不是特别清晰，为什么computer system will be closed down, 尽管后面提到了improvement，总让人觉得有些如鲠在咽，言之不尽;因此，思路不清楚是这篇****文的问题。　　此外，本文还有以下一些问题：　　1. 有些用词过于口语化，比方说，文章开头, I want to tell you, 文中you should save这样的用语;　　2. 建议Linux, 将SAP, ISO900等唬人术语统统除去，诚然BEC涉及到根本的商务学问，但是真正考核的还是语言功底，语用实力;商务学问好比是盖浇饭里面的小炒而已。　　，I want to suggesting….，当然阅卷者不会刻意去搜寻语法错误，而是综合考量语法得分，但由于小作文篇幅较短，那么这个错误就显得特别明显。　范文：　　Please be informed that our computer system will be closed next Wednesday at 12 o'clock for system upgrade. The closure will last for at least two hours. Make sure that you have saved all your documents before that time. The whole system will run on a new server, much faster than the current one.　　PART TWO　　l You work for PJT Ltd, a manufacturing company. You need more staff in your department and your line manager has asked you to write a report explaining why.　　l Look at the information below, on which you have already made some handwritten notes.　　l Then, using all your handwritten notes, write your report.　　l Write 120-140 words.　　学生作文：　　The purpose of this report is to explain why we need more staff in our department.　　We compare the number of staff in our department between 2001 and 2003, it only increased five staff. But the average number of ordered units grow up from 200000 to 400000 b