怎样提高中学生英语书面表达能力.ppt

如何提高中学生英语书面表达的能力
实际教学中学生在写作中经常出现的错误
教师在教学中的困惑
考纲上对写作的要求
我校高一、高二的具体做法
我校高三的具体做法
写作课实例
(2012南通一模) 下面这幅照片展现了志愿者活动的情景。请根据你对照片的理解用英语写一篇短文。你的短文应该包括以下内容：
1．简述照片内容，如情景、人物、动作等等；
2．结合自身实际，谈谈你的感想；
3．举例说明你将选择什么样的
志愿者活动并陈述原因。
Volunteers make a difference!
一、实际英语教学中学生在写作时经常出现的错误
一、实际英语教学中学生在写作时经常出现的错误
In recent years, there have been large numbers of volunteers devote their time and effort to people in need.
In recent years, a large number of volunteers devote their time and effort to people in need.
The picture shows us a touching moment that two volunteers help a disabled man in a wheelchair.
Only in this way can society be more harmony.
As we can see in the picture, many volunteers help people who is disabled.
(devote 改成devoting)
(devote 改成have devoted)
(that 改成when)
(harmony 改成 harmonious)
(is 改成 are)
Unfortunately, there still exists a great many problems.
As we can see in the picture that two volunteers are helping a disabled person to go upstairs.
We should help the senior citizens in the House for the Aged regular.
Realize it would be impossible for the man to get to the top all by himself, the volunteers carry the wheelchair with difficulty step by step up the stairs.
This picture reminds me many volunteers in my school, my community and our country.
(exists 改成exist)
(that 改成 ，)
（regular 改成regularly）
(Realize 改成Realizing)
(在me 后加of)
2011年江苏高考书面表达
The picture shows us a touching moment when a little girl comes to greet her working mom.
Realizing her mom must be very tired after a day’s work, the girl helps to remove the bag from her shoulder.
All this reminds me of my mother who has been doing whatever she could to let me have the best.
众所周知的是，随着人们生活水平的提高，汽车成了一种受欢迎的交通方式，给我们的生活带来了很多方便。
As is known to all, with the improvement of people’s living standards, cars have become a popular means of transport, bringing great convenience to our life.
…a popular means of transport, which brings great convenience to our