英文地质论文写作中常见的问题2016.ppt

英文地质论文写作中常见的问题
池国祥
里贾纳大学地质系
University of Regina
Importance of Publication
- Scientific records
- Communication with munity
- Contribution to scientific advancement
- Social-economic impacts
- Career development
写作过程也是科研的一部分:激发思维,推敲研究结果的意义。
审稿和修改过程对科研有促进作用。
英文地质论文写作的常见问题
结构及格式问题
语法和用词问题
其它问题
投稿注意问题
- Title
- Authors and affiliations
- Abstract
- Keywords
- Introduction
- Geological background
- Study methods
- Results
- Discussion
- Conclusions
- Acknowledgement
- References
General Format of Geological Papers
科技论文写作的主要问题是论文结构及格式问题,而不是英文问题。
结构好而英文不好的论文很容易修改,而结构不好的论文则很难改。
- 你要研究什么?
- 这个研究有什么意义?
- 你是怎么做的?
- 结果怎样?
- 如何解释?
- 得出什么结论?
最大问题是:
- 没说清要解决的问题
- 没交代清楚地质背景
- 描述和解释混杂
- 把数据放在讨论部分
- 讨论没有和前言呼应
Highlight 只说做了什么,没说发现什么
Detailed petrographic work carried out
Important constraint on U mineralization recognized
Xenotime coeval with uraninite in Athabasca Basin
Onset of U mineralization related to volcanism and brine formation
引言没有明确指出要解决的科学问题
不要把研究结果在前言里讲出来
没有分清目的(purposes) 和目标(objectives)
This paper aims to carry out detailed field, petrographic, stable isotope and fluid inclusions studies of the Poplar Mountain gold deposit.
This paper aims to understand the mineralization conditions and processes of the Poplar Mountain gold deposit, through detailed field, petrographic, stable isotope and fluid inclusions studies.
空洞的文献总结
Empty Review: The sedimentary and stratigraphy of the Viking Formation have been studied by Smith (1978) and Walker et al. (1990). Little work has been done on diagenesis, except a stable isotope study by Lee (1998). The petroleum system has been evaluated by Cook (1989), ….
Informative Review: The Viking Formation has been interpreted to have formed in a wave-dominated shoreface and transitional zones (Smith, 1978; Walker et al., 1990). A ic study of calcite cements by Lee (1998) yielded d18O of -18 to -15%o (PDB), which were interpreted to indicate……
Citations and references
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